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| From:  jennypoll (Original Message) | Sent: 10/4/2008 10:11 AM |
Laying
On the bed
Illicitly
Wrapped in
Pool of sunlight
Languidly
Purring
As she dreams
Infinitesimally
Twitching
With memories
Of last night's
Feline delights
Wicked cat
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Jen, this is wonderful, you capture the sheer sensualness (is that a word?) of cats - I love this especially infinitesimally - that just so describes our feline friends :)
Emma x
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| | | From: Rhumour | Sent: 10/4/2008 5:04 PM |
Very nice - I particularly liked the expression 'Wrapped in pool of sunlight' - vivid imagery  best wishes Rhumour |
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Thanks for your kind comments, I enjoy writing these so I am glad you enjoyed this one |
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I love cats, but the darn hairs get everywhere...  Yours sounds like she has a tail to tell...lol |
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Miaow - of course, don't they all Cheers Steve |
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A truly purrfect poem, Jen! ( Groan!!!!!! My puns are getting worse  ) |
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Thats purrfectly alright Lynn xx |
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Great word use, Jen. Has a lovely sound read aloud. Merlin |
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Wow, Merlin, you read it aloud, I am honoured I hope no-one was listening as you purred your way through it  Thank you for your comment Jen x |
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So true...discriptive of a cat... Maria |
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Too true, Maria, cats are so multi faceted, I have a few like this I have done xx |
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| | | From: Zydha | Sent: 10/9/2008 1:10 AM |
I so totally enjoyed this wonderfully woven word use, Jen, it read as smoothly as a cat's fur (or should that be...puurrrr, ) Zy |
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