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New Poetry Pge 8 : tropical depression
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From: MSN Nicknamestellar411  (Original Message)Sent: 10/6/2008 7:22 PM
 
sands shift
below weary feet
absorbing the coolness
of damp grains
beneath
 
the pillars of an
ancient ruin
rise

broken teeth

a jutting jaw line
sternly set
to expede
the spark of travellers
tracing nerves
of streets
 
there might be time
enough to read
a chapter of
Don Quixote
in the failing light
 
but in the classic sense
I think I’ve had enough
 

StellaR
October 3, 2008


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From: MSN NicknamebunnsosoftSent: 10/6/2008 8:01 PM
Wonderful write, Stella, I read and got the jest of it...
 
Good metahpor...
 
Mariaxx

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From: MSN NicknamejennypollSent: 10/6/2008 8:38 PM
Very good read, I'm assuming weary traveller who would like to have some peace

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From: MSN Nicknamejimmyjoyce1Sent: 10/7/2008 2:53 PM
StellaR ... you are so talented.... great stuff indeed .. regards from .. ken ..

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From: MSN Nicknamestellar411Sent: 10/7/2008 6:23 PM
 
 
merci beaucoup, my friends
 
very kind of you, Maria :)
 
aww, thanks jenny .. yes, time for pause
 
jimmy, you bring a tear to mine old eyes .. thank you
 
 
Stella

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From: MSN NicknameForestFlower5893Sent: 10/8/2008 12:53 PM
Sometimes weariness seems to overcome, I enjoyed reading, thank you

Emma x

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From: MSN Nicknamestellar411Sent: 10/8/2008 4:12 PM
 
 
hugs, thanks Emma
 
Stella

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From: MSN NicknameMerlin--_--_Sent: 10/9/2008 1:47 PM
A tribute to fatigue and the running down of time, Stella.
 
Excellent pen!
 
Merlin

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