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| From:  bunnsosoft (Original Message) | Sent: 10/6/2008 8:13 PM |
I've been here once before Against all warning to explore To seek the unknown hidden appeal surreal clauses writhe, as it draws near Curiosity beckons What have we here drawn like a moth to the flame dust and ashes, remain. Maria© |
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Oh yes, you've done it again, Maria That picture so seems to draw me in, if it did I feel I would be lost Jen xx |
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Hi Jen, the picture does draw one in... Thank you for your feedback, Mariaxx |
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oh, Maria you've done it again (but I've said that before in a few other lifetimes) lol StellaR |
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hahha just read jenny's reply.. there must be an echo echo |
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Not to worry Stella, I have a tendency to do that to people...lol Thanks for your support, means a lot to me. Mariaxx |
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I'm already lost in that picture. I can't find my way out.  |
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Picture and poem are so atmospheric, I felt I was drawn in
Emma x
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You poor thing P1...here, take my hand...I will get you out of there... Mariaxx |
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That's what I thought Emma, would you call it an optical illusion? It is a surreal scene... Mariaxx  |
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| | | From: Rhumour | Sent: 10/8/2008 10:24 PM |
Nice one Maria - as others have intimated the picture seems to have a semi hypnotic effect and provides a perfect match to your poem with it's allusions of mystery.  Best wishes Rhumour |
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| | | From: Zydha | Sent: 10/9/2008 1:25 AM |
Ditto Dave's comments, Maria, superbly matched, but you know I always enjoy these marrages of yours, Zy |
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Hi Rhumour...thank you for your kind review...always appreciate your feedback... Regards, Mariax |
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Zy, so nice to see you back again, I have missed your reviews, yours is like none other...thank you. Mariaxx |
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I'm not sure I can add much to what the others have already said, Maria. Great picture and poem. Together, very thought provoking. Merlin |
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Thank you Merlin...I can't say where this one came from, maybe it came from watching astronomy on National Geographics ... fascinating. The art reminds me of an anomaly ... black holes, etc.. Wouldn't it be wonderful if it could mastered for space travel? Leaving you with a thought... Mariax |
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