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New Poetry Pge 9 : Desert Storm...(Sunday repost)
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From: MSN NicknameCara_inSpirit  (Original Message)Sent: 12/21/2008 7:12 AM
Desert Storm
 
The sun rose and there was a hush across the plains of the desert,
not a breath of wind stirred on the horizon.
The sun 's heat beat down on the scorched earth
and the small shrubs  are stand ing huddled and withdrawn.
 
Out of the heavens the whisper of a breath is promised
there is a premonition of something to come
there is a sudden rush of hot, sticky air that sucks out
the last bit of moisture from the small desert bushes
the dust is caught in the movement of the air
rising to form a huge cloud, swirling and making patterns
 
The wind storm rages and the sand strips bare all in its path
Then as suddenly as it came it is no more  and all becomes silent .
 
written by  Cara 2002


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From: MSN NicknameZydhaSent: 12/21/2008 5:56 PM
I love this write, Cara, and after you had posted it the first time,
Lincus created a fantastic Powerpoint presentation using changing pages, moving text, etc.
 
It was back in the summer when I took some time out, and I sent it on to you by way of thanks from both of us that you had helped so to keep the corner turning, but,
it was also in the middle if my worst of my pc problems and I was forever being cut off and loosing posts, so wonder if you ever actually received it by forwarded email...hope so; lol; cos it is well buried in my archives, hugs, Zy x

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From: MSN NicknamejennypollSent: 12/21/2008 7:38 PM
I wouldn't want to be outside in one of those wind storms ....descriptive write, Cara

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From: MSN NicknameMerlin--_--_Sent: 12/23/2008 2:41 PM
Hey, Cara. This is excellent work. I've never experienced desert before, but this paints a vivid image. A strong sense of forboding, then fast motion and... the abrupt stillness of the end. Excellent!
 
Gordon

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From: MSN NicknameCara_inSpiritSent: 12/28/2008 1:17 PM
Hi Les
 
No unfortunately I did not receive that .... maybe you will find it again. It is lovely to know that my poem touched Lincus so deeply he felt to do that.
 
It has been kind of nice re-reading much of my writing as we make this move.
 
Hope you got my email re Group box group
 
love and hugs
Cara

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From: MSN NicknameCara_inSpiritSent: 12/28/2008 1:20 PM
Hi Jen
 
 
thanks for reading mine
I love storms but do like to be safe indoors.
 
 
 
Cara

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From: MSN NicknameCara_inSpiritSent: 12/28/2008 1:23 PM
Hi Gordon
 
Thankyou for your response. I love the deserts of Australia. I lived in the Pilbara for 12 years and have many wonderful memories of the landscapes. I feel so lucky to have lived there and had that time to absorb it s beauty and to feel the heartbeat of the land.
 
 
Cara

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From: MSN Nickname1oldarmybearSent: 12/28/2008 4:45 PM
I spent a couple of weeks in the Mohave deserton manuevers years ago.  I have never forgotten the stark beauty that is to be found there.  Thank you for reawakening the memory of it... Don

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From: MSN NicknamebunnsosoftSent: 12/28/2008 11:32 PM
Can't add much more to it, except to say "well done"
 
Mariaxx

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