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New Poetry Pge 9 : Underneath
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From: MSN Nicknametravellingpoet1  (Original Message)Sent: 1/4/2009 2:42 PM

Underneath the silken sheets

Our hearts beat as one

No clothes to spoil the intimacy

I touch your naked skin

 

We curl into each other

I feel your warming breath

Just touching and a teasing

The softness in your lips

 

Legs and arms entanglement

Heart beat in your breast

making perfect  Harmony

 with the beating in my chest

 

Softly in the night time

As tiredness takes hold

The beating breaks the silence

As the stars and moon collide

 

Holding you in intamacy

Holding you till dawn

Dreams of midnight dancing

Intoxicating morn

 
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From: MSN Nicknamekayano8Sent: 1/4/2009 2:45 PM
Tony what are you doing to me?...answered your poem then as my answer appeared whooosh your poem had moved...tsk sir...but still  I got to read it again...

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From: MSN NicknamebunnsosoftSent: 1/4/2009 5:16 PM
Most sensual and filled with eros...great job Tony, have missed reading you.
 
Maria

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From: MSN Nickname1oldarmybearSent: 1/4/2009 7:25 PM
This is softly sensual, Tony...  good work... Don

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From: MSN NicknamePoetess-three1Sent: 1/4/2009 7:38 PM
I'm just wondering how long it'll take me to post this reply as I seem to be having trouble with MSN again tonight.
I wondered where your poem had disappeared to. I thought you'd written it with invisible ink.
This is such a soft and tender write.

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From: MSN NicknamejennypollSent: 1/4/2009 8:34 PM
Beautifully romantic and sensual ....love it

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