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From: MSN Nickname1oldarmybear  (Original Message)Sent: 11/25/2007 12:12 AM
 
let me in
 
let me in
i won't harm you
honest i won't
i just want to chat
about your accessories
why must you
choose croc shoes
to go with
your new suit
and then pick a
purse du jour
to compliment your shoes
how would you feel
were I to wear
a necklace made
from human teeth
and an eyeball bracelet
i'm done with you
for now but let me
just say this
a pair of fine
leather boots
would look great
with that burgandy dress
 
Copyright ©2007 Don Tyson
11-24-07
 


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From: MSN Nickname1oldarmybearSent: 11/25/2007 12:18 AM
I've renamed this:
 
the croc dialog
 
let me in
i won't harm you
honest i won't
i just want to chat
about your accessories
why must you
choose croc shoes
to go with
your new suit
and then pick a
purse du jour
to compliment your shoes
how would you feel
were I to wear
a necklace made
from human teeth
and an eyeball bracelet
i'm done with you
for now but let me
just say this
a pair of fine
leather boots
would look great
with that burgandy dress
 
Copyright ©2007 Don Tyson
11-24-07

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From: MSN NicknameZydhaSent: 11/25/2007 12:55 AM
lol...well. it's got to be a 'male' croc with that lousy line in persuasion, bear,
 
but I chuckled lots through this read despite a few poignant points being made,
 
well scripted, Zy

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From: MSN NicknameVocalDixSent: 11/25/2007 12:34 PM
lol very good bear!

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