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| | From:  Zydha | Sent: 9/18/2006 12:06 AM |
This is lovely, Pip, slowly tender and romantic. I have read a lot of your earlier postings and enjoyed immensely, but these I find quite compelling to carry on through reading, as there is a link in some of their 'domestic' genre, but this one...is totally romantically beautiful. "I shall be back", Zy |
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'is totally romantically' lol 'tis true zy
many thanks again
Pip :0) |
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Perhaps her love collects amber moments,
ornaments in display with happy smiles
everlasting. A room devoid of clocks
ticking, alive in bloom of hyacinth scent
she breathes in slowly, believes in him.
Cloistered they play in candlelight. He talks
of oysters and she dreams of poets and pearls.
Red wine flows to laughter, shadows entwined,
now is the time. He takes her hand with care,
emerald eyes enchanting, with tender touch
reveals on bended knee, a ring. She smiles. |
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