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Sent: 8/14/2007 12:09 AM
The little boy
turning the page
finds rose petals
and claret stains:
a blue bottle
is spread silent
and no fragrance
colours the air.
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Sent: 8/14/2007 12:27 AM
paucity of words leads to various ideas - good one!!
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Sent: 8/15/2007 7:04 AM
thks for the visit aussie.
My latest version of this:
Her Diary
The little boy
turning the page
finds rose petals
and claret stains:
a blue bottle
is spread silent
and no fragrance
colours the air.
The little boy
begins to peel
the petals away
with secret tears:
for now he knows
the death that feeds
on all who hide
anger and pain.
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From:
TinglyShackleton
Sent: 8/17/2007 4:23 PM
Enjoyed the second version, Pip. As they used to say way-back-when... let it all hang out. Bye for now.
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From:
crispleaves
Sent: 8/18/2007 9:36 PM
Is that some building site thing? Thanks Shacks.
Pip :0)
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