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From: MSN Nicknameladycomealot  (Original Message)Sent: 5/5/2004 12:06 AM
Pain
 
Oh god the pain it cuts like a knife
I don't understand why
why this happened
what did I do
I doubt my own thoughts
I want you to make it better
please tell me
why did you play with my heart
my brain is a mess
I cannot think
tell me
let me know
why didn't you tell me
you could of
it would have been better
than this


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From: MSN NicknameZydhaSent: 5/8/2004 5:41 AM
A short but to the point nice poem, but I am now wondering if your poems are saying how you feel yourself, Lady. I have enjoyed them, but there is such sadness and anger in them, Zydha

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From: MSN NicknameladycomealotSent: 5/9/2004 12:24 PM
I suffer with depression caused by emotional and physical abuse and have found writing poetry to be a great outlet for my emotions as i cant talk about it really, but this a good way of dealing with it
 
Julie
xxx

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From: LittleBillSent: 5/9/2004 12:34 PM
I admire your courage....take your time.... : )lb

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From: MSN NicknameZydhaSent: 5/9/2004 2:40 PM
Yes, writing can sometimes help clear the sytem, exorcise the pain to some degree, Julie, and it's a great way to share with others from a distance. As lb says...take your time, but feel welcome to post your feelings, Zydha

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From: MSN NicknameForestFlower5893Sent: 5/9/2004 8:22 PM
Hi Julie
 
A strong poem, giving vent to feelings - but then that is poetry and writing is a marvelous way of releasing pain.
 
Well done
 
Emma

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