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New Poems Pge 1 : Le Vin de L'amour
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From: LittleBill  (Original Message)Sent: 5/9/2004 7:40 PM
Le Vin de L’amour
 
I met her in a whisper
it tenanted our lives -
secrets, hearts and pillows
perchance it wasn’t wise.
But who’s to talk of vanity
or Cupid’s urgent call ?
This midnight pact of lovers
begins to take it’s toll......
 
The sherry tasting purity
sweet, faulty and afraid
and I cajoled her petulance -
thanked God that I’d been saved
from ghostly imitations
lying naked in my bed,
I try the contradictions
but choose the truth instead.....
 
For is it wise to operate
with coldness of the mind ?
- we are but mere mortals
and treasure hard to find.
Just contemplate temptation
deliberate your will -
when the wine of love is empty
did you dare to drink your fill ?
 
©lb04


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From: MSN NicknameForestFlower5893Sent: 5/9/2004 8:25 PM
Hi lb
 
You have a great way with titles - my first language was french so I was intrigued to read.
 
A great poem - which flowed wonderfully - I loved the wording
 
Well done
 
Emma

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From: MSN NicknameZydhaSent: 5/10/2004 12:11 AM
 
I  agree with Emma, lb, this is beautiful and the title simply perfect.
 
This is so much the poetry I could read volumes of, Zed
 
PS. The reason I deleted is that I had so many so' in my reply....I sooooo had to reword it, lol. 'night, lb

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