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Audio : Darkness; W/E March 30th
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From: MSN NicknameZydha  (Original Message)Sent: 3/29/2007 2:04 AM

It breathes

In the darkness

It breathes

Will it come closer

I curl up

be a ball again

I curl up

That way, I am safer

It moves

In the shadows

It moves

Will it come

Near tonight

Will it?

Help me

Someone please

Help me.

I pray

I am dreaming

I pray

And I pray

But �?SPAN> 

But�?/P>

I am not!

 

(c) ZYDHA HART 2007  an experiment

(written for a challenge for a child's poem which 'rivets')

 Darkness echo.wav  


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From: MSN Nicknamemakhala334Sent: 3/29/2007 2:11 AM
secret - soft - scary

ooooOOOOOoooo

i like

thanks,
m

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From: MSN NicknamecrispleavesSent: 3/31/2007 10:01 PM
The disembodied voice was most effective zy!

Pip :0)

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From: MSN NicknameZydhaSent: 4/13/2007 1:09 AM
Thanks All for your kind comments on this experiment.
 
The poem is an old one and has meaning, but I thought I'd fool around with echo and see what it did to the effect, but my mike was just about to get worse and pack up...so it's a but scratchy, sorry, Zy 

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