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Audio : Disguised; Aug 25th
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From: MSN NicknameZydha  (Original Message)Sent: 8/26/2007 5:09 PM
 
I have changed the last word umpteen times, from 'thrill' to 'kill' and back again.
 
 

 

 
Weave a web of wonder
Like jewels in the rain,
Look but never ever touch
Observe its sweet refrain.
 
Fragile spins the spider
A deathly lure in guise
As prey is snaired in innocence
And never more, it flies.
 
A spiders web is tangled
Unravel, if you will, 
But as in life, entrapment,
Will so often . . . thrill. 
 
(c)  ZYDHA HART  2004
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As each word throws the poem into a different connotation and I honestly don't know which is my first choice...I seemed to have both concepts simultaniously (althought they are in conflict) I like both equally, and not simply for rhyming convenience....mnnnn, difficult. 

Opinions welcome......Zy

 
 


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