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Rhumour's Poetry : New Zealand Bound
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From: MSN NicknameRhumour  (Original Message)Sent: 9/3/2008 9:55 PM
New Zealand bound, via Africa and Cape Town
Here's hoping you're sure, to get there safe and sound
But first you go to Europe, maybe Asia too
Sad to think that only now
Can I say I've come to loving you

Still I've got to fight this feeling
For I cannot tie you down
It's just bound to feel so lonesome
I'm so used to having you around

So take good care now
Make sure the water's clean
Don't take this to heart
If it shouldn't strike you true

For it's merely a love song
That I've written for you
I've done it for others
And there'll be more of them too

Goodbye to you lastly
I won't see you no more
Just write to me sometimes
From that far distant shore
  
(c)Rhumour Summer 1971


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From: MSN NicknameRhumourSent: 10/24/2008 6:20 PM
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These are the lyrics to a song I wrote many years ago 


New Zealand bound
Via Africa and Cape Town
Here's hoping you're sure 
To get there safe and sound

But first you go to Europe,
Maybe even Asia too
Sad to think that only now
Can I say I've come to loving you

Still I've got to fight this feeling
For I could never tie you down
It's just bound to feel so lonesome
I'm so used to having you around

So take good care now
Make sure the water's clean
Don't take this too seriously
Just pretend it was a dream

For it's merely a love song
That I've written for you
I've done it for others
There'll surely be more of them too

Goodbye to you lastly
I won't see you any more
Just write to me sometimes
From that so far distant shore

(c)Rhumour
Summer 1972