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Steve's Poetry : Strange Jigsaw / Still in Pieces
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From: MSN Nicknamesteve_riggs  (Original Message)Sent: 1/3/2008 6:58 PM
 
 
Strange Jigsaw
 
She was once an unknown stranger to me
You won over my heart, soul, and my mind
As I came to know you gradually
I realised you were one of a kind
No friend like you, should I look forever
So many ways, our lives so similar
We understood, fitted well together
I knew just how you felt, and who you are
As a mirror, saw my reflection
Two pieces that seemed to fit as a glove
Now despair as I brought rejection
My friend, I am sorry I spoke of love
Though gone, my feelings for you never cease
A useless jigsaw, you, my missing piece
 
Still in Pieces
 
I rearrange pieces, with delicate care
Struggle to see a picture, through my tears
Realise she is not gone, a friend still there
To save me from myself, she always appears
I resolve to leave, some words unspoken
Explanations, that need no expanding
So never again, will the jigsaw be broken
Each piece held fast, by silent understanding
Our lives move on, we are friends you and I
Your kind support, means more than you can know
Now we try to laugh, no more tears to cry
I hope those days, will soon seem long ago
So now, I just wait, to see what will be
Pieces may complete a picture, eventually


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From: MSN NicknameZydhaSent: 1/21/2008 3:11 AM
The jigsaw pieces make an excellent metaphor for the emotions
you have written about here, Steve.
 
I enjoyed both expressive writes, Zy

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From: MSN NicknamePoetess-three1Sent: 1/27/2008 9:47 PM
Hi Steve,
 
I hope you find that missing piece soon.
 
Poetess
xx

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From: MSN NicknamePoetess-three1Sent: 1/28/2008 1:41 AM
And no missing pieces, I hope.

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