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Creative writing : I cant think of a name for this.
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From: MSN Nicknamemike-freddy-doorian  (Original Message)Sent: 3/13/2005 11:12 PM
I found myself in a state of frustration,
so i began to scratch.
Soon i felt the soothing sensation,
like the sound of a lighting match.
As my torn nails found their way,
my frenzy climbed to the max.
Frantic in all my dismay,
my fear began to relax.
 
I felt the confusion,
as it began to ooze.
This is no dillusion.
I was the one to choose.
 
I lay back and began to smile,
lying in a state of ease.
I dont have to be me for a while,
I'm away witht he birds and bees.
You won't understand me
and I cant explain,
I'm trying to be free
and rid of the pain.
 
Mike.
 
 


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From: MSN NicknameNamedCandyGirlSent: 3/20/2005 9:10 PM
I also have no idea on what to name your poem. Perhpas "Whiling [I think that's the right spelling!] Away the Hours". Or "The Itch".
 
Candy Girl

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From: MSN NicknamealreadygrownmanSent: 4/16/2005 5:49 PM
how about 'Frustrating Sensations'

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From: MSN Nicknameclaytime66Sent: 9/12/2006 9:51 PM
If I had to guess on a title personally I'd title it: "Four Twenty"
Just a thought.

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From: MSN NicknameBroken_PassionSent: 10/10/2006 12:28 PM
Either my mind is too dirty too understand this... or not dirty enough!
 
=P

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From: MSN Nicknamefrmear2ear10Sent: 10/15/2006 11:56 PM
For myself personally, I have found, that I look into what I have just created, and most times, I find a phrase within it, that describes, what I am saying, and can very easily be used as a title.
 
Is there any word or phrase within yours that you feel totally comfortable in using as the title to your well expressed creation?

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From: MSN Nicknamelost-contactSent: 11/24/2006 4:09 PM
i like all the titles you have given but even now over half a year down the line i tink it shall stay unnamed.
 
broken passion, i can see what you mean about it seeming dirty but it was aimed at self harm as apposed to masturbation haha.
 
maybe i will call it "deep clensing" ?
 
Mike.

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