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| | From:  densew-othei (Original Message) | Sent: 5/12/2007 1:36 AM |
a touch one at a time my shoulder, last brushing only one touch different touchers i don't know who they must want something, to tell me something, for me to tell someone me or is it just a need to touch again? ______________________________________________________________________ © dlc april 22, 2007 |
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Hmmm... Dee, is this a personal experience? You nailed something with this. just a need to touch again? |
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very personal switch no sooner did i feel that person leave, was i writing in my journal! very serene, not really surreal... a comfortable guest! Dee (i knew you'd find this!) |
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What more could you give us by replacing 'touchers' with another word? You detail an amazing experience...J |
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interesting pick-up, jen. that's one word that cannot be replaced ~ and that's how i sense them, through their differnt touches! |
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I recognize personalitites. If I know the person offline it's faster identification, but sometimes I feel something brush against me that has been there before and was unknown to me. Not sure who or what. |
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| agree with Switch the last lines seem to encapsulate so much. More even that the primary meaning....has overtones of the need within the living not only the dead to touch and be touch to allieviate the lonely isolation that we all internally exist in. |
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this belongs on Paranormal... as with the faces i see and have seen my whole life... they are faceless! my visitors are more like wind, held still for as long as their moment will take... sense them, i feel them and they're gone! as fast as reading this!!! hopefully, as with the faces that always haunt (i say this in a good way) me, there will be one or more that shows me something unique... their smile, a scar, the shape of their left eye.... if i'm lucky = i do see a whole face/head... but not often, not often enough! |
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Dee, Very nice inturpitation of a brush between two worlds... your heart squeezed between. Sorry about the spelling... I'm better at feeling than spelling. Bob |
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