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From: MSN NicknameneverCominHome  (Original Message)Sent: 6/15/2008 10:00 PM
Today is an empty roaming
a search in the dusty corners
peeking behind cracked doors
peering under chests of drawers
 
cobwebs in the corner
wave in greeting
dusty filaments sporting hollow shells
grotesque jewels
 
wallpaper stained and curled
reveals holes
missing stucco
piles in white dust
     to dust
     to ashes
in the cold fireplace
where sooty brick and charcoal
betray truth of an extinguished fire.
 
16 January 08
jlh


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From: MSN NicknameUnrulyOrangeSent: 6/16/2008 6:53 AM
betray truth of an extinguished fire.
Like the hallow halls of a living memory..
Since childhood,I've loved old abandon houses
Roaming is a great title

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From: MSN NicknameneverCominHomeSent: 6/16/2008 11:16 AM
Thanks Orange...I, too, like to roam old houses and imagine the life that once filled them...sometimes, though, I feel like the empty house...

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From: MSN NicknameSirNicolas4Sent: 6/16/2008 7:39 PM
the surface is smooth, with great images on wallpaper, but i see layers below with other images on walls that once echoed with love, and life....  end times for a relationship maybe, and it's bittersweet...verrrry nice both ways. thanks jen. keep writing

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From: MSN NicknameneverCominHomeSent: 6/16/2008 7:53 PM
Nic...you read me true

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From: MSN NicknameBranchyPeteSent: 6/16/2008 8:46 PM
I remember reading this in the forum when you were wondering about a title for it.  I like the title you've chosen, fits perfectly.  I enjoyed revisiting this.  Tis wonderful writing.

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From: MSN NicknameneverCominHomeSent: 6/17/2008 4:16 PM
Thank you Petey...I lose track of what I've posted where...rePetes are often worthwhile

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From: MSN Nicknamedensew-otheiSent: 6/18/2008 1:12 AM
i feel
this nothing but a shell of a house
a home
where people spoke truths
and whispered lies
 
today i feel
the cracks elongating
and the plaster burning
as i watch
i know
that all memories now reside within me
 
a burden to hold
but which i wish not to hold on to
 
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oops, this just came out jen...
your imagery must have hit a nerve!
as pete stated... it's nice that you found a title which fits this so well!  Dee
 
moving is always bittersweet... hang tough... you're headed in the right direction!!! 
 

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From: MSN NicknameneverCominHomeSent: 6/18/2008 2:08 AM
Dee Your verses have sent me thinking now...thank you

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From: MSN NicknameJewel2u22Sent: 6/18/2008 3:04 AM
I remember this one too jen..I love it
I can just see you finding all the little webs and lifes marks upon the walls as you pack and move things ...your memories will travel with you in your heart and you will have so many new adventures and find that place you will call home again. If I were closer I would come help ya pack..Im an expert...with 25 times under my belt I know tons of tricks lol...take it easy sweetie!

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From: MSN Nicknamedensew-otheiSent: 6/18/2008 10:07 AM
i think i know what got you jen...
i was speaking of moving, which is how your poem can be read... though, i know, back in january... you didn't know you'd be making such a change!
and this wasn't written with moving in mind at all!
funny how it correlates!

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From: MSN Nicknameslowlaneromance2Sent: 7/24/2008 6:28 AM
Got a good title for this one... and I know the feeling well...
Leaving Home.
Slow

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