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Creative Writing : The story of my life till now ....
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From: MSN Nicknamesixsrtung  (Original Message)Sent: 7/27/2008 4:49 PM
 
It all began
With a single word
Wahhhh!
 
A good word aptly describes many and most days
 
 
So  I was soiled
and fed
in a repeating pattern
I tripped and skinned my knees
Wahhhhh!
 
I rode a bike and I skined my knees
 
to be continued
 
 
 
I was bitten
By a dog, Wahhh!
By a bug Wahhhh!
By the cold Wahhhh!
By love Wahhhhhh!
But as the story goes so to say does the teller
 
 
I was smitten by the stars
and forever I will long for there embrace
I spend many nights aging in quiet wonder
While my thoughts and impressions mature and gray
 
I drove my car 
 skinned my teeth not once but twice
 
I was schooled in the most unpleasant ways
They simply pop the cap and pour it in I needed only to regurgitate
I learned more skinning my teeth WAhhhhh!
And wandering with the stars
 
 
It is true life is a ride
chaotic and real
 Like a wake from the wave
 ride it out hope for the best
 
Crests and troughs
in a repeating pattern
Wahhh!
I feel un well
WAhhh!
I feel exilerated
 
I tip precariously on the cusp of each crest and trough
if you think downside up
down is up
see it how you will
I opt for mism
 
Tread and stroke 
Think and smoke
 in a repeating pattern Wahhh!
 
Hurt and lose
Win and lose
Earn and lose
Smile when you lose
For it is the lesson
that has value
 
I was wet in my dreams
and some are gray and even
others are bumpy and noisy
but all are mine
and I cart there lode to and fro
for there richness and flavor
 
I was running
I stumbled and skinned my knees ... again
Will I learn?
 
REpeat
REfrain
REduece
Remit
 in a repeating pattern
untill everything changes
 
Wahhh!
The xenophobe is scared
 
To be continued
 
 
Share and change
 well this is new but not unpleasant
except at night theses little rug rats
can be so rude
 
 
But a pleasure a shinning little son
No two how lucky and poor
 
 
And how crappy this world i have given to you
It smells of rubish and noxious fumes
But do not despair
Well barely get along when you are teens
Who knows beyond
 
I cant even read the stars let alone a map of the future
I guess your the future I am old
mis used
perhaps Unneeded
I am alone and a little scared
could you hold me like I held you when your were frightened
Could you love me as I love you
You will love your own 
as I do
And the story will continue chapter by chapter 
in some
fashion
or another
 
Page by page
full and empty
weak and proud
 
Fantastic and unreal
Dreamt and realised
It is a beginning everyday
and an end to your pains trials and indesisions
 
I have said my piece now you shall say yours
And so to say the story continues .......
 
 
 
Another chapter ....the future un told and still it unfolds
I am ......I am ?
Yes I am
Wahhhhhhh
I drive on wet roads
Hands white on the wheel
She grabs for the handle....I wait
She will say holy smokin doodles
 
I should slow ....I would never leave her behind
Im getting ahead
Im getting to clear
Must be this anchor
 
It is not a new beggining it a new ending that says it best
The story so far is .............
A mystery ,  might just leave it at that  
I'll be back ....
 


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From: MSN NicknameSirNicolas4Sent: 8/6/2008 2:19 PM
i love this piece six. the line
 
'i skinned my teeth not once but twice'
 
was a gem. i enjoyed the cadence of simple words and the simple yet deep feelings wrestling with time and age. please let me suggest that within all this, the use of words like 'precariously'  'regurgitate' and
'xenophobic' draw too much attention to themselves as a break in the language of the piece.

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From: MSN Nickname♥Trìnìty�?/nobr>Sent: 8/11/2008 12:15 AM
"It is not a new beggining it a new ending that says it best "....like re writing the future?

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From: MSN NicknameJodie_3Sent: 9/22/2008 2:37 PM
I love this - it's like a cross between a poem and a song.  

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From: lizabethSent: 10/1/2008 8:40 PM
i liked--story continues in some fashion or another--
i am such a GIRL.
mention fashion and you've got my attention.
that probly wasn't exactly the point.

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