interesting... I like them both

 

but pete I would do away with your first "a shed, a man needs a shed"

It just looks out of place and early

 

or if you want to keep it in.. move it down a section and write another paragraph after neil young

 

 

 

 

 

Pete...it's nice to see your posting your writings again..

 

.All of you have been slakers hehe..I love reading all of them.

 

 The first one Pete.... I wouldn't change a thing

Dear Pete, Sounds Dreamy, Try not to keep musical instruments in the shed, tho,

okay?  Pretty please....or i will have to come steal them.