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This it then? Am I now supposed To just walk away And be happy? Did you actually listen To a word I said? Oi, you ignorant sod, Look at me When I’m speaking To you! Don’t turn The other cheek Like you couldn’t Give a damn. Then again, I don’t suppose you do, Do you? Fine, I’m walking - I’m walking and I’m not Looking back. You feel it now, Don’t you? Now that I’m gone�?/P> You wish I was Still here, The one to call Your own. It hurts, don't it? But, Don’t cry, you wimp. Big boys don’t cry. - ©2005 Emma J J - Have no idea where this came from, a 2 minutes flat poem. Love any comments though, Love, Fluff. |
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Hi Fluff, I'm so envious, lol, you manage to write so well in this style - whenever I try it just seems like a rant... Well if you did know where it came from then I'm guessing it wouldn't be something happy. Brilliant though, really enjoyed this. Well done! Katy |
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Hi Fluff, great title! Really enjoyed this - cut through the macho man, and you'll see the little boy. Although they say the little boys stays inside them - and I think it is true to an extent - being a mother of three of the lumps. Emma |
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Hi Tony, Lol I do know that big boys cry... In fact it shows a lot in a man for him to cry, I think, because a lot of people assume that men dont/shouldnt cry. Glad you liked this though. Lv, Fluff. |
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Hiya Katy, Why thank you for the lovely compliment.  I tend to write a lot better when Im in that kind of "mood." Sometimes I dont feel what Im writing in my poems, the emotions are not mine, but I guess I can just relate to them well? lol I dont know. I am really pleased that you liked this though, because when I said that it was a 2 minute poem, it really was a 2 minute poem! lol. You dont have to be envious of me though Katy, you have an astounding talent for your years. I couldnt write as well as you when I was your age, I dont even think I can now. Dont ever doubt your ability - you will go far. Thanks again hun, Lv Fluff. |
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hehe hiya Emma, That is so true, deep down inside every macho man there's a little boy somewhere. I know there is, because Ive seen my Dad cry a few times and he doesnt ever usually show how he feels. It actually shocked me when I saw it to tell you the truth. Glad you liked the title, hehe, I do too! Lv, Fluff. |
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Hiya Jools, Thank you so much for that beautiful reply! You always manage to make me smile with your little poem responses. I'm so chuffed that that's what you think of my writing (and me for that matter lol). Really, thank you. Lv Fluff. |
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| | From:  Zydha | Sent: 4/11/2005 12:57 AM |
Sharp and concisly to the point, no wasted words here, Fluff. Of course Big Boys cry, they are only bigger 'little boys' and hurt just the same, but I enjoyed these quickly written words very much. Nice to see your work on the corner, it shows how much your style is developing, 'night, luv, Zy |
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Good poem Fluff. Not easy to write a poem like this and make it sound good, but you have done it very well. And yes, some of us cry every time we look in the mirror lol Clive |
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A very good poem honey. Very well written and I think it says everything your heart wants to say I have posted some of my writing now!  xx |
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