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New Poems Pge 3 : Metamorphosis
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From: Christina  (Original Message)Sent: 4/12/2005 12:57 PM
 
The shadow sprawling across the salon floor
A credible replica of the wooden chair.
With every shift of light the shadow shifted too
Becoming unrecognisable - amorphous.
 
The chair its self remained unchanged - enduring.
Its carved back and fretwork equal in beauty.
An original easily forged and yet,
There is always something lost in translation.
 
A comforting smell of beeswax surrounded it
Filling the room, rich in substance and nourishment.
The inanimate could almost be animate,
Beguiling those near to stroke its alluring curves.
 
Over many years the grain had become smoother,
Every caress leaving an indelible mark.
Countless fingers had reached for the tawny wood,
Umpteen sighs of pleasure had wafted over it.
 
A chair caressed by a different breeze now,
The warmth of human breath instead of natures wind.
And a touch of soft flesh not a cool spring rain.
Its metamorphosis no less lovely despite death.
 
...
 
Christina Andrea © 2005
 
 
Hello folks, Hope you're all well! I'm not really back I'm just sneaking this in at work. My PC is still not working but I'll try to pop in again... Just thought I'd let you all know I'm still alive! C xxxx
 


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From: MSN NicknameMindmanukSent: 4/12/2005 1:30 PM
I liked this I like the thought of a well worn well loved easy chair where I have had many pleasant thoughts.
Mark G

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From: MSN NicknameZydhaSent: 4/12/2005 3:24 PM
Such is the joy in restoring furniture and prolonging it's lifetime and memories, Christina, a clever concept around a chair. I enjoyed this.
 
Nice to see you on the board, we miss you, (hope you are feeling better) love, Zy x

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From: LittleBillSent: 4/12/2005 11:27 PM
...wow...someone has been busy developing their poetry skills !...This is fantastic Chrissy darling, such a different style from your usual, and excellently carried out....but why a chair ?...couldn't you write something like this about moi ?....lol....but then I bet you'd include all the scuffs and scratches...lol...seriously...bloody good poem, awesome detail...and so good to see you here again...hurry back babe...pleeeeze ?
: )lb

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From: ChristinaSent: 4/13/2005 1:52 PM
Hi Mark, Zy & LB,
 
thanks all of you for your lovely comments..
I do miss posting but until my puter is sorted
I'll try & sneak the odd one in at work
 
Zy. I'm ok thanks got hospital friday so we shall see
what consultant says!
 
LB, Scuffs and scrapes show we've lived! lol
 
Thanks again,
 
Love, Christina xxx

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From: MSN NicknameBRBspasskySent: 4/14/2005 12:00 AM
wonderful poem woven around a simple thing like a chair. Tho yes, I can enjoy a good chair too. Nice to see you, with a hit poem too :-)
 
Steve

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From: MSN NicknameForestFlower5893Sent: 4/14/2005 8:58 AM
This is gorgeous Christina, I could picture the chair and the loving caresses - I'm an addict over antique shops and can spend hours just walking around them looking at the furniture and nick nacks - just wishing I could afford them, and imagining all the changes that they have gone through.
 
Emma

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From: ChristinaSent: 4/14/2005 12:11 PM
Hi Steve & Emma
 
Thanks both of you for your kind comments.
 
Stevie, thought you were more of a couch man! lol
Nice to be here albeit a short visit...thanks again for
keeping in contact my little Northern pal.
 
Emma, I love antiques too I'm addicted! lol
Re the poem I liked the idea of the cycle of the tree
even though it (obviously)died, it could still be beautiful.
Thanks Em.
 
Well the Boss is back tomorrow no more sneaky spins on the net..
Catch you all again when I can.
 
Love,
 
Christina xxxx
 
 

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