Hy Toni, a sadly quite accurate picture I imagine, of the lives of some who nowadays live in cardboard city, at 13, a very good write...needs typo or spelling editation  (miss trust... mistrust)

 

I deleted your poem about child abuse Tony, although it was an excellent poem, but, graphic enough that it 'could' be upsetting if a child a few years under 16 should have read it. lb has two young daughter and I have an 8 yr old grandaughter (granted viewing is always supervised) but, as we are Family rated, there were some references there which could have had a bad effect on their thoughts of their Paternal relationship. Hope you understand.

 

MSN do reserve the right to close a Family rated site without warning should we contravine 'General Family' viewing. Zydha

The sad face of homelessness, an excellent poem for a thirteen year old. 

 

Emma

Hiya thank you for your comment, I was very proud of this poem when it was first written. Do not intend to correct spelling/gramar errors etc as I would like to keep it how it was first written. Please remember my name is spelt TONI not TONY lol

I fully understand why you have deleted my poem about child abuse. No worries.
Luv Toni xx

Thank you Emma,  I wish more could be done for them xx

Hiya Peter, thanks for the welcome and the kind comment, glad you like my poem. Yours is very good too, and very hard hitting, it hits the senses. Luv Toni x