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New Poems Pge 3 : Walking the Night
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From: MSN NicknameForestFlower5893  (Original Message)Sent: 4/14/2005 6:59 PM

My eyes adjust to the light

To look as gloomy shadows rise

Long streaked stretches

From the curtain fall.

Pinpricks on my flesh

Crawl in insect trails

And reflexes numbed by sleep

Cannot brush this fear away.

My mind aches to flee

Yet soft warmth embeds me

For I do not want to

Walk the night

With only shadows by my side.

I toss and turn

Lashes veiling my eyes

As the geometric shapes

Murmur off the grey light walls.

It would be so easy to just succumb

And touch a just out of reach hand

Feel their breath caressing me in

In their deadly cold tongues

That feed on my bruises.

I do not want to

Walk the night

With only shadows

As company.

©EMG05



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From: MSN NicknameSatinbear04Sent: 4/14/2005 7:02 PM
Wow a very powerful poem, one that is left open to interuptation by the reader. My interuptation is of a child who is afraid of having bad dreams. A good poem, well done :) x

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From: MSN NicknameBouncing_FluffSent: 4/14/2005 7:18 PM
Hi Emma, as always your writing never fails to make me part of it. As Toni said, you can interpret this is so many ways if you think about it, but I have felt like this many a times. Keep on writing, lv Fluff.

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From: MSN NicknameForestFlower5893Sent: 4/14/2005 7:23 PM
Thanks Fluff and Toni,  this is a bit a part of childhood - when I was a child I used to watch the shadows move, and they would haunt me quite a lot - still do as an adult, there is a story behind them, but its pretty nutty lol, but then so am I .
 
Emma

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From: MSN NicknameZydhaSent: 4/15/2005 5:01 AM
Shivers, Emma, I loved the eerieness in your poem, but even more so I felt it...and after reading your reply to Fluff and Toni, I understand why.
 
I also do have not like darkness and shadows at night from childhood, again...with past reasons, (still sleep with dimmed hall lights on) so your words struck an scary chord, but again, as the words of an adult...they do leave room for different interpretations. I like pieces like that,  another beauty, Zy

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From: MSN NicknameForestFlower5893Sent: 4/15/2005 4:33 PM
Thanks Zy, I hate the darkness - and as a child was petrified of the dark, something which has never left me completely - I think though I was in a bit of morbid thought with poems yesterday lol
 
Emma

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From: MSN NicknameBRBspasskySent: 4/16/2005 12:36 PM
bit of a spooky one, nothing frightens us more than our imagination!
 
Steve

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From: MSN NicknameForestFlower5893Sent: 4/16/2005 4:55 PM
Thats true Steve, the mind can play terrible tricks at times.
 
Emma

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