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New Poems Pge 2 : Do you Remember?
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From: MSN NicknameMindmanuk  (Original Message)Sent: 9/16/2004 12:21 PM
Do you remember
Just sometimes
in the parallels
of our distant universes?
sometimes in the days
before the broken words?
Does your mind
Stray like a lost dog
to the home it once had
Or have  you acheived closure?
Open and snapped shut the case.
Recycled your photographs
along with everything
that could trace
your path
to where ever you went.
After the tears
after the pleading
After the moving away?
Am I alone in beleiving
in setting what once was
too high a pedestal?
Do you still dance
and dream
and remember
Just sometimes?
 
 
16/9/2004


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From: MSN NicknameForestFlower5893Sent: 9/16/2004 1:24 PM
Hi Mark,
 
I think we all remember those times, take them down from a dusty shelf once in a while.
 
Emma

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From: LittleBillSent: 9/16/2004 8:36 PM
Sad poem Mark....I usually get drunk when in moods like this...of course it doesn't help...but sometimes, for a while, it makes it easier...good poem. : )lb

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From: MSN NicknameZydhaSent: 9/16/2004 9:56 PM
This is a very sad poem, I can only empathise from an objective aspect, Mark, but have other memories which this sort of nudged, sad ones, Zydha

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