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(1 recommendation so far) Message 1 of 5 in Discussion 
From: MSN NicknameZydha  (Original Message)Sent: 11/7/2005 12:20 PM
"I pray the Lord
my soul to keep"
but if he doesn't
shall I weep?
 
Will there be time
for sins of mine
to be atoned?
 
Or shall I simply
be...
recloned?
 
No,  for I am me
and when I go,
may some have loved
yet, some not know.
 
 
(c) ZYDHA HART 2005
 


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From: MSN NicknameForestFlower5893Sent: 11/7/2005 2:48 PM
Hi Zy,
 
A variation on a childrens prayer - Life is very complex, humans are very complex, there is a little bit of good and bad in all of us - Hopefully more good of course.  An interesting idea brought into this prayer
 
Emma

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From: LittleBillSent: 11/7/2005 2:59 PM
Hi Zed
 
I like the simplicity of this...although the 'recloning' bit is quite clever - an interesting take on the natural dust to dust ashes to ashes recycling aspect of death...as Emma says the poem has an almost childlike quality about it which makes it more effective methinks. Well done.
 
: )lb

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From: MSN NicknameZydhaSent: 11/7/2005 4:28 PM
Hy Emma, I think Mikhails situation does make one think about time and his question on Debatables does it yet again, lol, so some serious thinking been going on.
 
It wasn't so much 'life' that was the inspiration of this thought, but the 'other' thing, Zy 

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From: MSN NicknameZydhaSent: 11/7/2005 4:39 PM
I was reading Mikhail's "I fell so deeply in love with life" again, lb, and that particular child's poem slipped into mind...so I guess I was in 'that' kind of mood when this started.
 
Yes, whatever one believes in, there is a recycling process, I found 'cloning' came to mind, then thought...no...and then, well...anyways, pleased you felt the simplicity was effective, Zed

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