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| From:  makhala334 (Original Message) | Sent: 10/31/2006 11:35 AM |
wall bangin�?BR>
unambiguous truth surreptitiously mute
steeped in encumbering strain
like marshal-salute spun down a volute
cretins curing cancer through pain
a senseless disease economically please
those with an insidious fix
truth in the lurch as human’s besmirch
just us poor-folk takin�?our licks
what i see with my heart is but a small start
of the truth the maimed have to live
it’s not really smart to take it apart
since they give all that one has to give
we pay and we pay �?‘til life drain away
then our kin-pay for what ‘science�?can’t save
as sweet practitioners impart their medieval art
upon our loved ones right-way-through to their grave
oh i wished and i want this bane-system to flaunt
only answers and kindness obeyed
but i’m a romantic i’m told - so my wishes grow old
as i wait as cures are waylaid
by industrial thinking and bankers still tinkering
with stocks and patents divine
as good people expire against their desire
while ‘the system�?somehow think things is fine
i don’t pray �?but i would �?if i thought it to good
against the ignorance of industrial care
i’d give my weak heart to a factory start
bringing cures and kindness to bare
ah �?please let me dream ‘way �?it passes each day
and is cause for amusement and chat
but i will continue to say - ‘til my voice go away
we must ever inquire like the cat
since humans do run �?to what seems to be fun
and avoid the strenuous and tall
but we must challenge our care �?‘specially when it ain’t there
though me head hurts when bangin�?that wall
i'm in a bit of a skeptical mood - can you tell?
best,
m
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Yes I can tell Mikhail lol. This is an excellent write! Don't bang it too hard my friend, or you may cause brain damage and have terrible headaches! |
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lol - toooooo late Zy - already brain damaged - and - therefore - can't feelthe pain anymore
thanks for the kind remarks dear friend - hope this finds you in better health,
m |
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| | | From: Zydha | Sent: 10/31/2006 12:42 PM |
Uh????....that was Dix, lol, here is my response! Yes! You are today, lol, quite plainly, Mikhail!!! So...move over Peter, lol, we shall have to get an even bigger podium. But despite the humourous response, Mikhail, another deeply though provoking write about we ordinary folk running in circles whilst observing some of the missing pieces of the one time/sometime complete jigsaw of life, now THAT was Moi! lol |
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wooooops - i - ah - ok - Zy - thanks
Dix - you aren't Zy - but you are Dixie - right - or am i wrong?? Anyway the previous message (saying i'm brain damaged, etc. - is for you - and i'm sorry i called you Zy - since you aren't Zy)
OK - so who's who
well - anyway - thank you all - each - everyone - really - i mean it -
an Stella - thank you very much - i too wish you could do this one in audio
thanks and best to all,
mikhail |
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Zy and M I think all the head banging caused a befuddled brain! hahaha |
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