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New Poetry Pge 6 : Damson Wine
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From: MSN Nicknamekayano8  (Original Message)Sent: 11/1/2007 7:53 PM
old men weep
on summers death
as damsons
fallen, now mouldy
shrivel to raisin,
rot, leave liver spots
on short green grass,
old women group
in rememberence
 
for the once strong men
who in youth climbed
to the highest boughs
for only there
can you harvest
the sweetest of fruit
fond memories
and wishful thinking
see the women
smile
 
this seasons wine
will be sweet
uncorking
should go well
yet truth is undeniable
for each passing year
the wine tastes
increasingly
bitter


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From: MSN Nicknamejimmyjoyce1Sent: 11/1/2007 8:02 PM
Stella ... stunning stunning and so appropiate for this particular time of year.... you are very gifted indeed....from jj

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From: MSN Nicknamekayano8Sent: 11/1/2007 8:06 PM
ahhhh behave yourself  Jimmy...lovely comment though my friend...x

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From: MSN NicknamePoetess-three1Sent: 11/1/2007 8:14 PM
Just one word, Stella - wow!

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From: MSN Nicknamekayano8Sent: 11/1/2007 9:18 PM
awww hek Poetess three......thanks for the wow...

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From: MSN NicknamebunnsosoftSent: 11/1/2007 9:29 PM
How true of what you say, I loved the last part, where you mentioned the wine as being bitter, old age is...! Well expressed Kayo.
 
Maria

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From: MSN Nicknamekayano8Sent: 11/1/2007 9:58 PM
thanks Maria....kind comment indeed....x

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From: MSN Nicknamemakhala334Sent: 11/1/2007 10:08 PM
oh how well you speak of aging
 
it is truely 'bitter-sweet'
 
thanks for sharing Stella
 
 
best,
m

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From: MSN NicknameZydhaSent: 11/2/2007 2:18 AM
The wrath of Bachus is a good metaphor, Stella, loved this one,
 
very well scripted, Zy 

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From: MSN NicknameamonikabyanyuvaSent: 11/2/2007 11:34 AM
A poignant poem, well written, i like the conciseness, and the imagery. very nice, ani

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