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| From: kayano8 (Original Message) | Sent: 11/1/2007 7:53 PM |
old men weep on summers death as damsons fallen, now mouldy shrivel to raisin, rot, leave liver spots on short green grass, old women group in rememberence for the once strong men who in youth climbed to the highest boughs for only there can you harvest the sweetest of fruit fond memories and wishful thinking see the women smile this seasons wine will be sweet uncorking should go well yet truth is undeniable for each passing year the wine tastes increasingly bitter |
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Stella ... stunning stunning and so appropiate for this particular time of year.... you are very gifted indeed....from jj |
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How true of what you say, I loved the last part, where you mentioned the wine as being bitter, old age is...! Well expressed Kayo. Maria |
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oh how well you speak of aging it is truely 'bitter-sweet' thanks for sharing Stella best, m |
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| | From: Zydha | Sent: 11/2/2007 2:18 AM |
The wrath of Bachus is a good metaphor, Stella, loved this one, very well scripted, Zy |
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A poignant poem, well written, i like the conciseness, and the imagery. very nice, ani |
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