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New Poetry Pge 6 : Spinning the Bottle
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From: MSN NicknameZydha  (Original Message)Sent: 11/2/2007 2:46 AM
 
 
A solitary saxaphone
drifts in lonesome sound
as the ol' guy staggers
out an' aroun' an' aroun'.
 
Every night each glass he'd sup
between two hands like a lovin' cup.
 
Weaving to and fro he sees
in shadows of the ol' boardwalk,
a sight to send him to his knees
which slowly began to talk.
 
"Every night each glass you sup
between two hands like 'our' lovin' cup"
 
T'was Jesse from three years ago
in her laced white bridal gown,
she looked at him with furrowed brow
face stained from tears falling down.
 
"Tis true we drank from our lovin' cup
but now the glass you must give up"
 
He just sighed and stood up straight
knowin' Jesse'd wisely reckoned,
that he was playing around with time
and his was not yet ~ beckoned.
 
 
 
(c) ZYDHA HART 2007


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From: MSN Nicknamemakhala334Sent: 11/2/2007 10:53 AM
a solitary piece
 
gives one to wonder its source
 
a little different - even for you
 
what's in here i cannot feel?
 
m

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From: MSN NicknamebunnsosoftSent: 11/2/2007 11:05 AM
I gather the man did not meet to the lady's approval...sometimes it is wise to walk away...
 
Maria

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From: MSN NicknameZydhaSent: 11/2/2007 3:35 PM
It's just an objective view of someone who is drinking their life away, Mikhail, but with the woven in tale of the reason for his drinking....here....it is the loss of his love, who revisits in wraith-like form to give him a caring warning.
 
Just a 'fairy tale, lol, there is nothing more within this time, was in a funny mood last night and the muse was tickling away,  Zy

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From: MSN NicknameZydhaSent: 11/2/2007 3:38 PM
Aahhh, Maria, in this little story, it was the woman who departed first, only to reappear to save the love she left behind.
 
But thank you for reading, sometimes I can be a little lateral with my thinking, lol, but of course, what you say is true regardless, Zy

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From: MSN Nickname1oldarmybearSent: 11/2/2007 7:06 PM
I love the images this produced, Zy... A great piece... bear

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