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New Poetry Pge 6 : A kind of madness
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From: MSN Nicknamejimmyjoyce1  (Original Message)Sent: 11/3/2007 1:12 AM
 
Of late, I kinda got used
to the way the ground opens up
and swallows me when i walk my dog
or that thick sided music the wind
can make when I run for a bus.
 
Things have come to that
 
and each night now, I stare upwards
and I count the stars. Do you know
each night I get the same number.
When they will not come to be counted
I count the holes they leave.
 
Nobody sings anymore
 
and I remember once after counting
I tiptoed to my daughter's room
and she was talking to someone yet
when I opened the door
there was no one there ...
only she, on her knees, peeking into
 
her own clasped hands.
 


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From: MSN NicknameZydhaSent: 11/3/2007 2:18 AM
Sometimes we become too embroiled in our own enclosed space and here I feel you speak of those times when certain very ordinary thing take on a different significance because we are,
 
forgive if I have this one wrong, Jimmy for it read to me as a personal moment, but it made an interesting piece...for I spent a few reads looking for the madness, Jimmy, instead...I found aloneness being awakened, Zy

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From: MSN Nicknamekayano8Sent: 11/3/2007 1:03 PM
Oh I think I know this feeling Jimmy...I used to speak with people just to make some sort of contact...felt this one...x

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From: MSN Nickname1oldarmybearSent: 11/3/2007 2:57 PM
I love the way this made me feel... bear

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From: MSN NicknameVocalDixSent: 11/3/2007 11:59 PM
love this and the way I feel reading it!

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From: MSN NicknamebunnsosoftSent: 11/4/2007 4:30 AM
Not madness Jimmy, just insight into enlightenment...most deep, then you are deep and dark and mysterious.
 
Regards,
 
Maria

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From: MSN Nicknamejimmyjoyce1Sent: 11/5/2007 2:24 PM
to .. Zy .. Stella .. Bear .. Dixie ..and Maria...just a few words to say thanks for that response...madness & enlightenment I reckon are akin! Best wishes to you all fromm jj

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