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New Poetry Pge 7 : The Telephone Call
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From: Jayne  (Original Message)Sent: 2/8/2008 6:20 PM
The telephone rings, her heart beats faster
On hearing his voice; the meltdown begins.
His words serve to calm, no more disaster;
They are soulmates, almost a pair of twins.
Smiling, she snuggles back into her chair.
He tells her how much he wants to kiss her
He likes her deep blue eyes, her golden hair;
She likes him too, she feels she must concur.
 
The two of them talk, and then talk some more;
Reluctantly he says, "I have to go."
She says farewell to the one she adores,
Her perfect man, her one true love, her beau.
 
Then she settles happily to await
His return through their wooden garden gate.


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From: MSN NicknamebunnsosoftSent: 2/8/2008 6:56 PM
So touching and sweet, love your recounting of lovers...
 
Maria

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From: MSN NicknamePoetess-three1Sent: 2/8/2008 7:40 PM
It's just so sad when we have to say goodbye. I hate goodbyes!
This is a beautiful poem.

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From: MSN Nicknamephilip113Sent: 2/8/2008 7:43 PM
Home can be a piece of heaven on earth,Jayne,and we underestimate the importance of the garden gate.

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From: MSN NicknameZydhaSent: 2/9/2008 1:35 AM
I have a feeling that this is more 'clandestine'
than simply 'a day away at the office',  Jayne,
or am I looking too deeply, lol.....
but it is a cleverly intriguing write.
 
I leave in a couple of weeks for a little while,
or you'd get used to the fact...that I am always doing that,  Zy
 

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From: JayneSent: 2/9/2008 11:39 AM
 
Ummm ... what can I say, Zy?

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From: MSN Nickname1oldarmybearSent: 2/9/2008 1:59 PM
Seperations are painful, but the reunions are something to live for.  Enjoy...bear

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From: MSN NicknameVocalDixSent: 2/9/2008 2:29 PM
Aww a sweet and tender write Jayne!  Anticipation.

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From: MSN NicknameZydhaSent: 2/10/2008 12:41 AM
hahaha.....well, since I am the only one out on a limb, Jayne,
 
at least tell me if I am close, or if I just have a suspicious mind, lol, Zy

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From: MSN NicknameForgottenMelody4Sent: 2/10/2008 8:35 AM
Dear Jayne,

What is it they say, absence makes the heart grow fonder? Loved this piece.

Melody x

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