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New Poetry Pge 8 : Cider Apple
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From: MSN Nicknamejennypoll  (Original Message)Sent: 9/28/2008 11:39 AM
A tantalising hint of apple
Scented the afternoon air
Stopped me in my tracks
Took me right back there
To the cider apple trees
Standing in orderly rows
Laden down with fruit
Standing on tiptoes
The girl that I was then
Stretched enough to fill
Basket after basket
To send to the cider mill
 
If the serpent’s offering
In Eden, as the story tells
Had been a cider apple
Then there would be no hell
Tempting they are not
Until they have fermented
But then, oh do take care
When with scrumpy you are tempted


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From: MSN Nicknamesteve_riggsSent: 9/28/2008 3:26 PM
Ah trust the Devil to choose Granny Smith's

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From: MSN NicknamebunnsosoftSent: 9/28/2008 6:31 PM
Love the verse ... never tried apple cider wine...I bet it is delicious...I drink apple cider, they make it fresh here..
 
Oh well, the devil always tempts us with something that would cause us distress.
 
Mariaxx

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From: MSN NicknamePoetess-three1Sent: 9/28/2008 8:25 PM
No Steve, I think that the Devil would choose Cox's.

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From: MSN Nicknamekayano8Sent: 9/28/2008 8:43 PM
lol and all the devils would be pissed?...great read Jen..much enjoyed..x

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From: MSN NicknamejennypollSent: 9/29/2008 12:26 AM
Thank you for your comments xx
Steve, you can't make scrumpy from Granny Smiths !
Grampy Smith wouldn't like it lol
 

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From: MSN Nicknameval64157Sent: 9/29/2008 6:14 PM
Scrumpy is a very potent brew
But apple trees with fruit are sweet to view.
I like this one Jennypoll, it reminds me of some of my mispent youth

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From: MSN NicknameForestFlower5893Sent: 10/2/2008 7:52 AM
I Loved this, my grandfather used to make cider :) brought a nice memory back

Emma x

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From: MSN NicknamejennypollSent: 10/2/2008 7:55 AM
Thanks Val and Emma, I enjoyed writing this, one of the ones that just comes into the head x And I am glad that it brought memories back for others too
Jen x

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