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New Poetry Pge 9 : Possible sunday repost
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From: MSN Nicknamekayano8  (Original Message)Sent: 12/28/2008 2:25 PM
She'd like to have a mark and hit it
with more promises, less broken nights.
But would she be welcome if she did it?
Perhaps she'll know if reality bites.
Now certain's not on her agenda,
more probables, some ' if only' thoughts.
So let's wait and see what's there tomorrow,
not feeling whole and yet she's caught,
balanced on the airy stilts of abstract
dare you take her by the hand?
She's down and fettered to the now.
Sinking fast in no mans land.
Will you go to her when she's dreamless?
Oh then she'll fight,  to make you real.
It's cold in here bereft of meaning
massage her want, help her heal.


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From: MSN NicknamejennypollSent: 12/28/2008 3:06 PM
I like the 'airy stilts of abstract' .....the trouble with reality, though, is that it is always there .....welcome or not ...
Jen x

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From: MSN Nickname1oldarmybearSent: 12/28/2008 4:32 PM
I do enjoy your work so, Stella. you paint such vivid word images... This makes me want to reach out to the person you discribe... Don

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From: MSN Nicknamekayano8Sent: 12/28/2008 6:01 PM
Thanks Jen..I am a total realist   live and work the fact of reality each day  not nice sometimes...perhaps that is why my writing at intervals reflects a side where magic works still?..dunno but I enjoyed penning this some time ago and thought I would dig it out...
 
Bear that is a great compliment     A hug is always good ta!!

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From: MSN NicknamePoetess-three1Sent: 12/28/2008 6:37 PM
This is fantastic, but if my thoughts were any more abstract, they'd be scattered all over the floor!
 

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From: MSN NicknamebunnsosoftSent: 12/28/2008 7:23 PM
It is good to live in a dream world...reality sucks sometimes...I like your poem Kayo...it bespeakx bittersweet.
 
Mariaxx

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From: MSN Nicknamekayano8Sent: 12/28/2008 10:31 PM
Lynn all you gotta do is pick em up off the floor and arrange them just so!....lol x

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From: MSN Nicknamekayano8Sent: 12/28/2008 10:34 PM
Maria yes..bittersweet indeed...I believe dreams are great..reality does suck at times and there is naught wrong with a little escapism ....now where is me tiara...off to the ball...

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