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New Poems Pge 1 : In Truth
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From: MSN NicknameBradene  (Original Message)Sent: 5/9/2004 6:12 PM

 

Down pathways old

and worn with time,

where spirits of a million souls roam free.

Some dark with ancient evil pass,

but most,

in light and goodness accompany me.

~~

My favourite pathway

always leads

to the ebb and flow of the sea;

Down rocky scree,

to pebble beach,

my heart and mind both flee.

~~

On this wind scoured

shore I sit

to contemplate my life;

in truth the only heights I’ve reached,

are a mother and a wife.

~~

Oh! how I long for greater gifts.

To soothe and entertain;

to write the poetry of my soul

all the words my heart contains.

~~

To extol the beauty

of this life,

to ignore it’s ugliness.

To concentrate on the positive,

to dismiss it’s wickedness.

~~

Yet, I cannot be ignorant,

of the things I see and hear.

To pretend there are

no cruel things

In this world of ours to fear.

~~

I cannot turn a blind eye,

what would be the use.

I tell things as I see them,

For truth,

I will not confuse.

~~

Nor will I wrap my meaning

In clouds of metaphors.

Just read my words,

and understand

My thoughts,

like open doors.

©

Copyright

VMM

2004



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From: MSN NicknameForestFlower5893Sent: 5/9/2004 6:48 PM
Hi Val
 
Very beautiful and thought provoking - who at the end of the day are any of us?  Except that we all have thoughts and feelings and emotions.  There but for the grace of God go I.  Being a wife and mother is all I am - It counts for something - maybe not greatness and the best raconteur at a party - but it is still important!
 
Take care
 
Emma

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From: LittleBillSent: 5/9/2004 8:13 PM
Very deep indeed Val, which of us is not plagued by such thoughts at one time or another.....you my dear are a fine poet...a lovely person and...a Mother and Wife too !...I am not worthy.... : )lb

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From: MSN NicknameZydhaSent: 5/9/2004 10:14 PM
Super words Val, as wife and mother, we can all agree...no mean task, but as a poet....never question your value, I have loved what you have to say about whatever and the way you choose to say it.
 
Write your words ...and should they be of something negative, so what??? Everything that is...has to have an opposite...even positive thinking, so write as your mood and feelings take you Val. luv, Zydha x

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From: MSN NicknameBradeneSent: 5/9/2004 10:17 PM
Thanks Emma, Bill and Zy for the lovely response to my poem, i'm so happy that you all enjoyed it Love val xx

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