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From: MSN Nicknameladycomealot  (Original Message)Sent: 5/10/2004 12:24 AM
HONESTY
Just lately I have been looking at me
To see if I can see what you see
A woman who smiles to cover the tears
and a laugh that covers all her fears.
An empty soul, so scared to love
I sends my prayers to the one above
please let me see what you can see
for I fear what it is that I can't see.
The pain is deep and so hard to bear
I lived my life without a care
but that was a show to keep you away
so let us start a brand new day.
I feared the emotion called human love
but now i hear my reply from above
you need to go out and catch that man
for  it's all part of the greater plan.
So here I go on a brand new day
once more to give my heart away
make sure you give it lots of attention
for what you do now can't be undone.
For now I give my heart to you
my view on life begins anew
let me live and let me love
I pray to you the God above.



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From: MSN NicknameZydhaSent: 5/10/2004 12:37 AM
I like the sense of optimism in this, Julie. You know that saying? Nothing ventured...nothing gained. It has a nice rhythm too, easy to read through smoothly, Zydha

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From: MSN NicknameladycomealotSent: 5/10/2004 8:43 PM
Thankyou, this was my first poem that i wrote about a month ago and it was wrote at a time when my depression was first starting to lift a bit. I actually like this poem for the simple fact that it was the first time I was able to move on in my life.
 
Julie
xxx

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From: MSN NicknameZydhaSent: 5/10/2004 9:21 PM
You only started to write a month ago??? wow Julie...well done, I thought you'd been doing it for ages.
 
See how well you write already...I felt that from your words within this poem, Zydha

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