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From: MSN NicknameVocalDix  (Original Message)Sent: 11/10/2006 12:40 AM
     There was a computer screen, the whole length of the wall.  I had my remote control in hand.  There were highlight buttons, delete buttons, scroll buttons, picture buttons!  I was hired to put the physical scenery on the screen.  Nobody told me why or for whom it was to be done.  The scenery was all in a row,  like sitting ducks.  Clock radio, garbage cans, tables with items on them, plants and toys.  What kind of collage was this?
 
     Dimming of the lights, background fading into infinity.  Obscure shadows of people in the corners of the room, silent as ghosts.  "Begin," a rasping voice said.  I began slowly, not really sure how this worked.  Finally, I found a steady rhythm.  Push or squish a button, the image or words appeared.
 
     Oops!  Hit a wrong one!  Go back, highlight delete!  But it would not disappear.  Try again.  Words and pictures deleted I did not want gone!  Horrors!  Scribbles and phrases began to appear over the pictures of the items, obliterating their atmosphere.  Backwards button, trying to correct this atrocity.  Things kept going from worse to disaster.  "Can I start over?" I asked.  "NO!"
 
     Silent ghosts from the shadows kept changing the items in the scenery around and I was so confused!  "You were to be the best," the rasping voice hollered.  "Who told you that?" I asked.  "Never mind," the growling voice whispered finally.  "You have failed.  We will try somebody else tomorrow."
 
     One by one, the gray figures left the room.  The screen went silent.  I found a note upon the desk in the scenery.  It told me to turn off the radio, turn out the lights.  No off button on the radio, so I could only turn the volume down by remote.  Nothing worked by hand at all in this strange room!  Where is the light switch?  Nothing at all on the walls but paint, and my remote control only worked the computer screen overhead.  Turning around in a panic and dizzy, I found another remote by the door on the floor.  It read:  "Lights out."  I pushed the button.......
 
Dixie L. Scott (c)


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From: MSN NicknameVocalDixSent: 11/10/2006 2:17 PM
Thanks Stella lol.  My dream was about being in a new church building last night, so no poem or story with that one lol.  I have alot of wierd dreams like that.  Maybe I should start a dream book too!  Would love to hear some of yours.  Hugggs sis!

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From: MSN NicknameZydhaSent: 11/15/2006 11:30 PM
(((shivers))) Dix. I too have dreams, but they are more nightmares with blood and shadows and gorish happenings.
 
They say that dreams are often a refection of or subconscious mind acting out  suppressed, actions or impulses....but then one has to wonder.
 
Perhaps this was some refection on frustrations in cyberspace??? Whatever, you transposed it well and with great ambiance, Zy

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From: MSN NicknameVocalDixSent: 11/16/2006 10:56 PM
Thanks Zy!

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From: MSN NicknamecrispleavesSent: 11/29/2006 10:13 PM
Good one Dix. I thought there was a 'chill' to the ending, as if it was going to be 'lights out' for the person.
 
Pip :0)

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From: MSN NicknameVocalDixSent: 11/30/2006 1:11 PM
By jove Pip got it!

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