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P of T W Winners : Damned Juliet; by Steve; 20-01-08
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From: MSN NicknameZydha  (Original Message)Sent: 1/21/2008 12:23 AM
 
Damned Juliet
 

a love struck Romeo sings a street suss serenade
laying everybody low with a love song he made
finds a convenient streetlight
Damn,
I reach out for the radio
But,
I don’t have the heart
I stop, short
Knowing, I’ll be torn apart
Juliet the dice were loaded from the start
and I bet and you exploded in my heart
and I forget I forget
My mind races
Working out
The words, the words ahead
Pictures of you
Seep into my head
Juliet when we made love you used to cry
you said I love you like the stars above
I’ll love you till I die
Too late now
Its coming
The verse, that gets to me
Because, the truth
Hurts so damn painfully
and all i do is miss you and the way we used to be
all I do is keep the beat and bad company
all I do is kiss you through the bars of a rhyme
julie I'd do the stars with you any time
Then I cry
For
Me
For
You
For all the stars
I know, we will never do
when you gonna realize it was just that the time was wrong?
When am I goona realise
Its only, a damn song ?

 

by

 

Steve

 

Inspired by the words of Mark Kopfler's Romeo and Juliette



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