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From: MSN NicknameŠourdough  (Original Message)Sent: 4/23/2008 6:42 AM
I love erotica. Do you have a favorite story to share? One you have written or one you've come across elsewhere ....
 
(yes, of course the pun was intended)


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From: MSN NicknameRockinRobin-APSent: 4/26/2008 1:45 AM
I've been known to make up on the spot "bedtime stories". They work like a charm.

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From: MSN NicknameLoveliestSeekingLynnieSent: 4/26/2008 4:07 AM
I've never tried writing anything erotic just because I don't find the words I want to express when I'm making up a story. NOW A FICTIONAL STORY ABOUT A SHITTY LIFE???? THIS I CAN DO!! LOL!

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From: MSN Nicknamecbchopsticks1Sent: 4/26/2008 6:51 AM
i'm always writing little stories. some times they stay in my head.   my mum, now she could spin a story out of her head. she never did anything with her stories. or her paintings. sad to say.

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From: MSN Nickname£øñgßøw�?/nobr>Sent: 4/26/2008 5:47 PM
Ill have to see if I can dig up some of mine. Ive been working on one the past few weeks but not sure it is one that would be liked here unless you would happen to be into D/s.

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From: MSN Nickname£øñgßøw�?/nobr>Sent: 5/11/2008 4:35 AM
This is one Ive been working on for a blog site that Im on. Most of my friends there are of the D/s lifestyle. If its not your thing I understand... if it is... email me....
 
 

What do I want? Ill tell you. I want you on your knees legs apart sitting back on your calves waiting for me. It might be a few minutes or it might be an hour or two. Ill be there when I get there. You will be in your white panties and noting more other than your collar. You will be in your living room on your knees head down and hands behind your back. When I arrive I will expect you to remain in that position until I do otherwise with you.

Two hours later..

I enter your house walking thru your living room past you as if you weren’t there to the kitchen to get a drink of water. Returning to you I grip your hair in my hand tightly from behind pulling your head up to see my face. Didn’t you know to have a glass of water waiting for me? Didn’t you? Pushing your head back down. I dig in my pockets and find a set of nipple clamps. You like these don’t you? ....Hush.. I didn’t ask you to speak. You could have had them if my water had been waiting. Raise up and stand on your knees! Moving behind you, I rip your soft white panties down the back and off your hips. I hold them to my nose inhaling your sweet scent. MMMMmmmmm that pleases me. You feel my cold fingers on the lower part of your ass cheeks. I clip the nipple clamps on that sensitive area just inside you thighs between your ass and your pussy. You can feel them bite as they pull the flesh just below your lips with the sensation of pulling you open slightly. You feel a very cold sensation as I cover your tight little ass hole with lube. I have something for you �?a very heavy glass butt plug. You feel the pressure of the plug pushing against your pretty little hole. Tighter and Tighter as you have been on your knees for so long and your not relaxed. Just as it seems as you can't take any more you feel the smooth shoulder slip into place. Sit back on your claves…�?as I push you back down to the position I found you in. Do not let it slip�?hold it right there. Walking around in front of you�?put your eyes down!

Sitting back on the couch admiring your beauty. Your muscles firm as you strain to hold the plug in place and your nipples hard from the breeze of the AC, the jewels on your collar glistening in the light. Have I told you how beautiful you look in the new collar? You wear it so well. What is it that you would like today? Maybe a nice hard spanking?, or enjoying my thick cock slipping down your throat? hmmmmm�?or maybe experiment with something new? If you’re a good girl just maybe you will get to feel the new jewelry pounding past your cervix until you cum.

I kneel in front of you. Placing my fingers under your chin I raise your head �?look into my eyes�?/I> taking your white panties in my hand an holding them to my face. Once again inhaling . You can see the pleasure in my eyes as I’m lost in your feminine scent. Placing my fingers under your chin once more I move my lips to yours�?kissing gently�?as just a breath across your soft lips�?biting gently on your bottom lip as I pull away. My eyes slowly opening from the kiss as I place my fingers softly in your hair and pull it to my face�?Mmmmmmm so sweet. Gripping your hair firmly on the back of your head snatching your head back. You like the soft gentle side of me don’t you?�?Quiet!!! I didn’t tell you to speak.. Holding your damp panties over your nose and covering your mouth with the other hand. Breathe �?that looks so fucking hot. You like having pussy in your nose don’t you! Breathe deeper. This is why I had you waiting for me�?the longer you waited the better your scent�?. Now open your mouth�? Wider my little lesbian slut. Pushing the crotch of your panties into your mouth I push your chin to close your mouth around them. Then reaching behind you to tie the torn ends behind your head. You whimper as I pull the knot tight in your hair. You like that don’t you?�?you look like such a helpless slut . Is that pulling your hair? .. Reach up and adjust it…�?if you dare. Is that a no? I cant understand you with your mouth full�?good girl. I’m not going to tie your hands but you are required to keep them behind you as if they were. Do Not Move Them! reaching down between your legs�?lets remove these for now.

I stand to my feet in front of you. Raise your head my dear. What is it that you want?�?ohh yeah I remember. Is this what you want? Slowly I unbuckle my belt and unbutton my leather pants. you like the smell of leather don’t you? pushing the crotch of my pants to your face. Reaching deep inside I slowly pull my decorated cock from my pants. My thick cock falls in front of your face. Not hard but nice and thick and long. Is this what you wanted? �?too bad your mouth is full. Taking my hand as if milking down the length of my cock you see that glistening drip form at the tip and begin to string down the silver ring. Stroking down again another larger drop slides down the ring and strings off the shiny ball onto your lips. Laughing�?I>Wouldn’t that taste soo sweet if only you could taste it�?Rubbing my now slick piercing over your lips�? That looks so good on you sweetly. Keep your hands behind your back SLUT!! Do you want to feel it? Grabbing your hair I pull your face to my cock .. feel it? You like the warmth of that. You reach for it one more time and that is all you will be feeling it..

Kneeling I grab your hair and pull your head to one side�?sniffing around your soft neck. I can feel your heart beating, your blood pulsing beneath your skin. I brush my teeth over your neck. Is that goose bums..? Digging my fingers deep into your hair and throwing you to the floor as I bite firmly into the tender skin between your neck and shoulder. My fingers squeezing tighter in your hair. My bite harder and harder�?with just a hint of fear you whimper wanting to struggle but at the same time enjoying the pain rushing thru your body. Rushing to those places deep inside you that hands will never touch and that are never spoken about in public.

To be continued�?.


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From: MSN Nicknamecbchopsticks1Sent: 5/11/2008 5:30 AM
is that you and your gal?

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From: MSN Nicknamecbchopsticks1Sent: 5/11/2008 5:31 AM
the photo reminds me of a vampire movie.

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From: MSN Nickname£øñgßøw�?/nobr>Sent: 5/11/2008 5:38 AM
The story or the picture?... the picture is just a net pic I used since it sort of went well with the story.  As far as the story it is very simular to a few situations Ive been in.

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From: peejaySent: 5/11/2008 11:01 AM
You're so good at painting a picture LB..
 
this is virgin(pleez excuse the pun) territory for me, and an intersting look into sexual expression I've never experienced before..
 
hot stuff there darlin.. VERY HOTTTTTTTTT

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From: MSN NicknameŠourdoughSent: 5/11/2008 9:00 PM
I knew that we have some good erotic writers in this group. Nice story, LB. I will wait eagerly for the next installment.

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From: MSN NicknameŠourdoughSent: 5/22/2008 9:23 AM
 
Peggy's Bath
© 2002, 2008 by Sourdough.
 
The house that I shared with Peggy, my first female roommate, had one peculiar feature. Peggy had to walk through my bedroom to get to our only bathroom. That gave me plenty of opportunities to notice things about her. She is a tiny girl �?not five feet tall, with a thin waist and well-proportioned hips. Her backside was a thing to behold. When they were together, her ex-boyfriend used to tease her by calling her "bubble butt". She had no bosom to speak of. Small breasts. Not that I had actually seen them, but you could tell from the way her clothes fit her. She has thick, luscious blonde hair. Very thick. More like fur than hair, really. Luxurious.

For several weeks we lived platonically. We would watch television at night, chat about the day's events and go to bed in our separate rooms. Living in such close proximity, it was only natural that Peggy gradually crept into my masturbatory fantasies. That was surprising to me, but enjoyable. I began thinking about her during the daytime, too. Not about spending "forever" with her �?it was purely a physical attraction.

One night she began to prepare for a date. She had met some guy at work and he had asked her out. It was a first date thing....nothing major. Dinner and a movie or something.

She excused herself to go take a bath. We didn't have a shower in that old place, just an old tub. I had installed a telephone shower that attached to the tub spout, but we never used it as a real shower, just something to use to rinse off with.

I could hear the water running for her bath. I could smell the bath salts that she had poured in. Something just came over me. I got up from the couch, walked through my own bedroom and entered the bathroom where she was sitting in the tub.

She was covered in bubbles, so I didn't really get to see much. And, of course, she was totally shocked that I was there.

"I'm going to give you you're bath tonight," I said.

"I can bathe myself," she said.

I was listening close for the "no", but she didn't quite say that, so I persisted.

"I know you can," I said, "but I want to do it anyway.".

She sat perfectly still. I picked up the sea sponge that she beside the tub and placed it in the water. I started with her back…right in the center…slowly worked my way to her shoulders…her neck. Each time I moved the sponge to a different area, I did so hesitantly, waiting and fearing that she would stop me and tell me to leave.

Then I had her lie back in the tub. She covered her small breasts with her folded arms, not wanting me to see. I washed her arms. Gently I took one of her hands and slowly pulled it away from her chest, so that I could wash its entire length. She shuddered as the sponge approached the ticklish spots at the inside of her elbow, and her underarm.

I tilted her head back and gently washed her exposed throat. I moved to her other shoulder and washed that arm in the reverse order, starting at the shoulder and working my way slowly under her arm, down her upper arm, to her inner elbow…forearm…wrist…and finished with her hands. I washed each finger separately.

Then I moved back to her chest. She had not exposed herself to me yet. She was still hidden beneath a sheet of bubbles, but that cover of bubbles had thinned considerably. I could make out the outline of her torso and I could see her small breasts through the white translucence.

Starting at her neck again, I gently washed slowly down. Avoiding her breasts, I moved the sponge in slow circles on her stomach, and up her sides. Her muscles would tense each time I passed over her ribs. She may have been ticklish, but she didn't want to laugh. Her eyes remained closed and she just lay back and enjoyed my efforts.

I finally put aside the sponge, and lathered my hands. She opened her eyes to watch me as I rubbed the bar of soap between my palms. I placed my hands beneath her arms and pulled her up, exposing her breasts above the water line. With my lathered hands I began to massage her tiny breasts. Although the breasts were small, her nipples were remarkable. Small areolas, but the nipples were the "pencil eraser" type. They tickled my palms as I passed over them. I enjoyed the exploration. I could completely cover a breast with the palm of my hand. I would move my hand to the underside of her breasts, with my palm flat against her ribcage and use the web between my thumb and forefinger to support each breast, as though that portion of my hand were the under wire support of a bra. I would slide my hand up and massage the muscles that I could feel underneath her breasts, enjoying the sensation of her erect nipples on my palms as I did so.

But so far, I had only been concentrating on her torso. I had more to explore. I moved to her feet. Soaking in the soapy water had softened the skin. I lathered my hands again and began to massage her feet.

She ducked down into the warm water, covering her chest again, resting her head against the rim of the tub.

My hands were slippery as I massaged her feet. Using both hands, I worked the upper side of each foot with my fingers, while probing her soles with my thumbs. I would start at her heals, and using my thumbs and forefingers, I would squeeze her foot from heel to toe, finishing off by ministering to each of her tiny toes. I moved to her ankles. The Achilles tendon at the back seemed tight.

I stroked from ankle to knee. I made a band of my hands, circling her entire leg and pushing it up from ankle to knee, forcing the blood ahead of it toward her heart. I stopped at her knees. She seemed especially ticklish there. Not at the back of the knee, as I had expected, but where the tendon attaches to the front of her thigh, right above the kneecap. I had to slow down there. She seemed to jump each time I squeezed.

Gradually, I moved up her thighs. Again, I used both hands on each thigh, never letting my hands leave her skin.

I did not have to coax her to open her thighs. She knew I would not attack her most vulnerable spot unless and until she was ready. I worked on her thighs for as long as it took to feel the tension to completely leave her body. When everything else was done, I asked her to stand. Although I had washed at the juncture where her legs reached her torso, I had not touched her sex.

"No," she protested, "You'll see me."

"Yes," I said. "I will."

"Please."

Shyly, she let me help her to her feet. I pulled the plug in the tub to let the water drain. I lathered my hands again. Turning her to face the wall, I had her place her hands against it for balance. I positioned her legs about shoulder width apart, so that I could wash her bottom. No sponge here. I used my soapy hands. She jumped as my fingers brushed her anus. But she didn't move away.

I was in heaven. This was the most beautiful ass I had ever seen -- not that I had seen that many, except in magazines, but this one was right in front of my eyes. I couldn't believe that this was actually happening.

I continued to wash her. No penetration...this was a cleansing. I had an almost uncontrollable urge to spread her cheeks and taste what was before me, but I resisted.

By now the water had drained from the tub. I reached over and turned it on again, adjusting it to a comfortable temperature. With her standing in the middle of the tub, I began to rinse her. Starting at her neck, the water flowed over her rinsing away the soap and bathwater. As the white foam peeled away, it seemed as though a final covering of cloth was being removed. Although she had been naked all along, she was now truly exposed. Completely cleansed, as though everything that had happened before that moment in time had been melted and washed away down that drain. No woman in my life has ever appeared so virginal.

I reached behind me for a towel to cover her. I remember now that I started drying her by touching her eyelids. She had not been crying, but her lids were moist for some reason. With my hands behind the towel, I blotted her cheeks, which I remember were very flushed. Then her neck. Shoulders. Arms. I wrapped the towel around her torso, trying to cover her breasts and tuck the towel into itself, the way I have seen women appear after emerging from a bath. I was too clumsy with that and she had to help me.

With a second towel, I dried her legs, starting as high on her thighs as I dared to reach, and toweling toward her feet.

When she was dry, I took her by the hand and walked her back to her bedroom. I did not turn on the lights. I laid her back on her bed. And removed the towel. The hair on her pubis was as thick as the mane on her head. Bushy. I could wait no longer. I wanted her. She lay back with her eyes closed. She must have known what was coming. I spread her legs apart. We were in the dark. I could not see, so I cannot describe the appearance of her sex, and, of course, it lay hidden within that forest of luxurious fur. I knelt at the foot of her bed, her legs apart. I bent my head and turning my head to the right, placed my mouth on the inside of her left knee. Her skin was so soft. So clean. I am sure that I must have opened my mouth to taste it, but I honestly do not recall. Slowly I kissed my way up her inner thigh. Did I bite her? I think not. I may have been tempted, but this was too tender. I moved closer to that tenderest of all flesh, where her inner thigh meets the torso. Not the lips...but that skin that covers the large tendon there. It must have a name...that region ... what is it? I brushed my nose across her bushy mons as I continued on to the other side. That same spot, where the tendon is. Do you know it? At this point I know that I opened my mouth. I clasped the tendon in my teeth, not biting really. Not painfully so. But oh, how I wanted to.

I placed both of my palms on her inner thighs, not forcing her legs apart, for they already were. Just holding them where they were. I brought my hands slowly up to her sex. My thumbs were just at the margin of her outer lips. And I stroked her slowly with my thumbs. I moved the fingers of both hands to the top of her mons, my thumbs on her labia, and my forearms against the length of her inner thighs.

And finally I tasted her.

And my mind went into overload. This was something that I have never experienced, before or since. I cannot describe how she tasted. She was sweet. Not tangy. Not musty. Sweet. There is no other word. This was where I now wanted to be for as long as I could stay there. This treasure had been literally under my nose for months and I had no idea. I ate her hungrily. I licked. I stroked. I penetrated her with my tongue, my fingers. I moved my hands to the outside of her legs and had her wrap her thighs around my neck. Still I couldn't get enough. I couldn't get deep enough into her. The more I tasted, the more I wanted. The wetter she got, the sweeter she tasted.

And then �?the God Damned doorbell rang! And kept ringing. There we were, in her bedroom, naked, and her date had arrived.

I jumped up, put on my clothes and went out, and told the son of a bitch that she wasn't ready yet. He needed to come back in half an hour. I wasn't very nice about it. 

He went away and I headed back to her bedroom. But the moment had passed. We went no further that night. She got up and got dressed for her date. And I went to my room and stared angrily at the ceiling.


Author's note:

Every word of the above story is true. I wrote it all one night in a chat room at another group, later cutting and pasting all my posts together into a cohesive story. If I remember correctly, the process may have been part of a "Truth or Dare" game that we were playing that night. I think that almost everyone faded out before I finished writing. If my memory serves me correctly, there was only only one other person who stayed with me through the whole writing process.


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From: MSN Nicknamegr_and_funkSent: 5/23/2008 7:04 AM
and I wondered WHY he was a lawyer..that was one HELL of a sumation!!!

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From: peejaySent: 6/3/2008 3:54 PM
ohh the anticipation and build up of that story..
 
did you ever consumate the relationship?

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From: MSN NicknameẄỉtçђ�?-©Sent: 6/4/2008 4:47 AM
you know, I find that the guys
write the best erotica
"almost" the best kink
sub vs master
 
its ........... almost controlling
to read
yet smooth to enjoy
 
yes
 

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