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Creative Writing : As You Stepped Out Of The Bath Tub!
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From: MSN NicknameBetween_Lines_And_Verses  (Original Message)Sent: 10/14/2007 3:16 AM
 
Rose scented water runs off your glistening body, as you step out of the tub. I
take your hand and make sure you do not fall. Your eyes sparkle like diamonds,
matched only by your smile as I wipe down your body for you. Sensuously, I
plant tender kisses in all my favorite places, as your hands stroke my hair. I
try to spoil you as often as I can my love, but once a week, I set one evening
aside, especially for your enjoyment.
 
It's just a romantic gesture, to reassure you, that you are my happiness, the
person who makes my life feel complete. As you add a touch of your favorite
perfume here and there, I can feel your heart begin to race. Because you know
that before the night is thru, before you drift asleep in my arms, my hands, my
fingers, my warm lips and more will release the tenseness from your soul...as
you cry out my name. It has been and always will be my joy to tempt and tease,
lick and kiss and let you walk among the clouds. Love is a magical experience
shared between two, and I never want the flames of passion between us flicker.
 
We walk, hand in hand to our bedroom, I watch your twin treasures sway from
left to right, as you lick your lips my darling and tug on each one. When the
open the bedroom door, you murmur a sigh, when you hear your favorite romantic
music playing, when you smell the scent of candles, when you see the sheets
turned down. The room is warm, inviting, as you lay down first, as you watch me
head for the kitchen to warm lavender scented hand lotion for your massage. On
the stand beside the bed, is a single red rose, and my newest love poem, written
just for you!
 
When I return, in the candle's light I see your eyes, almost tear filled, as you
whisper you love me! As you turn over, so I can massage your back, I begin
to bestow soft kisses all over your neck, teasing your ear lobes as you feel
shivers cover your body. Then, my warm lips travel up and down your spine,
and further still, as I kiss and lick clear to your feet. How I love the way you
moan darling, how I love the way your body reacts to the tenderness that will
always be eagerly shared.
                                                                                                              
Once I make it back up to your neck, you turn towards me and we share a
magical kiss! A kiss never meant to be broken, but is, for I whisper, "close
your eyes baby, let me spoil you in ways you have come to crave and enjoy"! Slowly, oh so slowly, warmed hand lotion is massaged into your neck,
shoulders, back, cheeks, and thighs, all the way to your toes, unhurriedly. I
remind you of moments we have shared that highlight the togetherness that
makes life worth living that keeps you close to my heart, and in my dreams.
 
Once you turn over, it's my heart that begins to race and join your heart as I
admire your body. Over and over we kiss, and as my lips spoil your neck, I
feel your arch your neck and your hands curl around my head. You breath
shortens...as you moan just the way that reassures me that, I am all you have dreamed of. Inch by inch, I work my way down, spoiling each spot where I
stop and linger, as your fingers run tenderly through my hair. Soon, I am at
your feet, massaging hand lotion in, all the while looking up into love swept
eyes. I watch you bite your lip, as you feel the softness of my hands as I caress
your inner thighs.
 
When the time is right, loving hands hold your waist as you feel like you are
floating on clouds as I encourage you to enjoy what is reserved only for you!
When I think you can't wait another moment, I climb up into anxious arms and
we make love. It's a slow patient journey, the best part of this night where,
your body is filled with goose bumps, as you move to the rhythm of two
lover's entwined as one!
 
Only when your body shudders, when you grip me tightly, when your eyes
become pools of emotion and you cry out my name and squeeze me tight, do
I lay upon you. Ever so lovingly, I kiss your neck again and again whispering
that I love you, that I have always loved you, and that I always will. Neither
of us moves, we just lay there in the after glow teasing each other's lips as two tongues dance in candle light. When the candles have burned low, as you turn
over on your side, I lay behind you, and I cup you. The music ends, the candle's flame flickers and is out, and I tenderly kiss your back and whisper... "I will see
you in my dreams darling", and we drift off to sleep! 
 
© 2004 Raymond Cook (All rights reserved)


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From: MSN NicknamegreyingredSent: 10/21/2007 8:35 AM
god lord brought back memories of a very special person, sadly never to be repeated. Maybe there is just only one for each of us.....but I keep trying lol. Enjoyed this immensely though not quite as much as the reality.......

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From: MSN NicknameBetween_Lines_And_VersesSent: 11/20/2007 3:58 AM
Love is what two people put into a relationship...and just like a car, its wise to keep it tuned up and happy! Love awaits all of us. The trick is being patient, taking that chance and sharing a smile. From there, in time a bridge can be built between two hearts hopefully!
 
Happy thanksgiving!
 
Raymond.
 
P.S. I have moved all of my writings over to the Lines & Verses thread, to the left at the bottom of the row!

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From: MSN Nicknameswitchgears1_Sent: 2/22/2008 5:41 PM
Raymond
 
I have been offline for several months and just now saw this.
 
 
It's difficult for some writers to relate an episode and end it satisfactorily 'for the reader.' .. That is to say ... it had a happy ending. As a rule readers do not like pieces with unhappy conclusions or sequences of events, that do not tie together.
 
And ...
 
It is a particular grievance for me, that an otherwise excellent writer is unable to convey an explicit scene without graphic words.  You are to be commended  for your ability, to relate a sexual episode in gentlemanly terms.
 
To sum up ... You did a great job pulling all aspects together. It was beautifully written and flowed like liquid. 
 
Even though I haven't been as active in WSAM as I usually am, I do run thru here and read the writer's post. Unfortunately, I'm so computer limited time wise .. I can't always respond. Just wanted you to know that.
 
 BTW ... Your board looks great and I'm proud it's in WSAM.
 
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From: MSN NicknameBetween_Lines_And_VersesSent: 2/23/2008 12:00 AM
Thank you for noticing this post Switch!
 
By no means am I the perfect writer, but I try not to offend anyone with what I post.
 
Raymond.

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 Message 6 of 8 in Discussion 
From: MSN NicknameJodie_3Sent: 2/25/2008 7:44 PM
That is beautiful, sensuous & sexy, even without the graphic words  ... lucky lady
 

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From: MSN NicknameneverCominHomeSent: 3/6/2008 9:29 PM
Therein lies the art, no?  When you can capture all that sensuality in a tasteful, tempting way...Thanks for posting this...J

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From: MSN NicknameJodie_3Sent: 3/9/2008 4:53 PM
>>Therein lies the art, no?<<
 
you said it  :)

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