Ah lb,

 

the wishful hopes of a poet succinctly put - not sure about the last line - but who knows - she may forgive you.

 

Emma

 

 

 

LB this is such a romantic piece, full of meaning.

Not sure about the very very last line some how it doesn't fit...LOL

Oh!.... put me foot in it again have I...Tony

I like it just the way it is. Made me smile.

There is something more traditional and archaic about the whole of this lovely piece, lb, but that last line, although quite amusing, does little to add any quality to this.

 

If this were mine, I'd rethink that last line and make this just a little more special, but you 'could' leave it as a modern acknowledgement of the single-mindedness of 'some' men, lol, Zed