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New Poetry Pge 4 : Beneath The Surface
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From: MSN NicknameZydha  (Original Message)Sent: 11/2/2005 12:25 PM

 

Take the hand of friendship,

Unclasping fingers you will find,

The lines of loving and of living

And the markings of the mind,

Behold the open book within.

 

Read the prophesies of past times

Embedded there at birth.

Observe sadness and the sorrows,

Trace the memories of mirth

From the Mount of Moon begin.

 

Trace, palmate predictions

Then, follow to the eyes,

The Chart of Life unflinching

With a look which seldom lies,

That's how to touch, beneath the skin.

 

(c)  ZYDHA HART  2004



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From: MSN NicknameCalamitykiss2Sent: 11/2/2005 5:21 PM
Hiya Zy,
 
I really liked this. My best friend and I met on this day last year and we've been having our 'Friendship Anniversary' today. I just showed him this poem, thought of it as a nice inclusion to the day. Aside from it striking a personal chord today, I liked your ideas here.
 
Thanks,

Sin

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From: LittleBillSent: 11/2/2005 7:12 PM
Very nice...does the job. Good poem. : )lb

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From: MSN NicknameForestFlower5893Sent: 11/2/2005 9:17 PM
 
Hi Zy,.
 
I loved the sentiment in this - but the one line that jarred with me was
 
From the Mount of Moon Begin
 
I don't know, for some reason this line throws the poem for me, yet I really love this poem and what it says.
 
I hope you don't mind
 
Emma
 

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From: MSN Nicknamemikhail34Sent: 11/3/2005 12:43 AM
ooooooooooo  talk about the philosopher - very nice and very deep,
 
well done,
 
m

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From: MSN NicknameZydhaSent: 11/3/2005 1:42 AM
Hiya Sin, lovely to see your name around again, hope all is well with you.
 
What timing, so pleased it suited the occasion and that it held some further meaning to you, thanks, Zy

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From: MSN NicknameZydhaSent: 11/3/2005 1:43 AM
Very nice? Does the job??? mmnnn... I take it you weren't too impressed, lb, lol, but thanks for taking time to comment, Zy

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From: MSN NicknameZydhaSent: 11/3/2005 1:45 AM
I had trouble with that line Emma, so yes, I know what you mean, but I wanted to bring in the main line in palmestry somewhere, but...
 
as we discussed, I'm open to suggestions, am pleased you liked otherwise though, thanks, Zy

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From: MSN NicknameZydhaSent: 11/3/2005 1:49 AM
I just love your sound effects, Mikhail, lol, I could hear that...ooooooo...from here!
 
I love reading palms, Mikhail and this was prompted one evening after three of us had some fun doing just that. We had such a discussion about the validity of 'fate', Zy

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