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I trace the curve of your lips with my finger,
It fills me with warmth to see that light in your eyes,
You seem so happy in this moment.
And then suddenly I hear a musical sound,
One I thought I’d never hear again,
Your laughter.
I feel my own bubbling over
Because I would have given the moon and everything,
Just to see you smile again.
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What a lovely thing to share with a friend...you have probably brought more than laughter, you brought warmth. Maria |
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| | From:  Zydha | Sent: 10/31/2007 1:34 AM |
You know what they say about 'a friend in need' Melody... well, these gorgeous words sound like you were exactly that, a lovely read, thanks,  Zy |
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this is full of warmth and hope... bear |
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Dear Everyone,
Thank you for all your lovely replies. My friend who I wrote this for has been experiencing depression lately, and it's only recently that she has shown signs of any emotion. It's such a relief! We thought we may have lost her.
Thanks again, you don't know how much your replies mean.
Melody x |
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