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 Message 1 of 11 in Discussion 
From: MSN Nicknamesteve_riggs  (Original Message)Sent: 10/3/2008 1:52 AM
She snuggles down, into the bed
Thoughts of me?
Inside her head
Does she think of all the things we said?
Hearts pump blood
Of crimson red


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 Message 2 of 11 in Discussion 
From: MSN NicknamePoetess-three1Sent: 10/3/2008 2:03 AM
I snuggle down into my bed
With thoughts of keeping warm
'Cause by the time I snuggle down,
It's 4: AM on a freezing morn.

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 Message 3 of 11 in Discussion 
From: MSN NicknamebunnsosoftSent: 10/3/2008 4:36 AM
Short and sweet, deep write...filled with undercurrents...
 
Maria

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 Message 4 of 11 in Discussion 
From: MSN NicknameForestFlower5893Sent: 10/3/2008 8:16 AM
This is a story to be told Steve, so much put into those lines, a poem that leaves the reader asking - what was said?

Emma x

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 Message 5 of 11 in Discussion 
From: MSN NicknamejennypollSent: 10/3/2008 9:04 AM
Nothing much to add to what has already been said, except I love it
Jen

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From: MSN Nicknamejimmyjoyce1Sent: 10/3/2008 12:07 PM
Steve...perhapd you ar an aristo with blood.. not like most of us crimson red.
Sweet rendition...k

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From: MSN Nicknamejimmyjoyce1Sent: 10/3/2008 12:11 PM
Steve Sorry got some fast typed typos in there..." Perhaps as an aristo with Blue blood, not like the most of us crimson red. Sweet rendition...From
k...   apologies

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 Message 8 of 11 in Discussion 
From: MSN Nicknameval64157Sent: 10/3/2008 2:58 PM
Oh! Steve! Of course I do, think of you, but not often.

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 Message 9 of 11 in Discussion 
From: MSN Nicknamekayano8Sent: 10/4/2008 2:30 PM
I'm having trouble sending replies today so   hope this doesnt double up!!
 
K said in the first reply that I thought this went well with Lynns Crimson Sunrise poem  and....are you the sunrise?...I thought it read well as a riddle ya see..ok well off the mark aint I?..lol...

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From: MSN Nicknamesteve_riggsSent: 10/4/2008 9:38 PM
When I read this back (too late posted on impulse as usual lol) I thought it a little simple... but funnily enough it seems to have struck a cord.
 
So thanks Maria, I shall try not to let the currents sweep me away
 
Ah Emma, thats a whole different poem
 
Jenny, glad you liked it.
 
Ken, you should know if my blood turns cold and blue, I shall find someone to warm me up
 
Val, thats nice of you... not lost my number have you ?
 
Stella, nope not a sunrise, more of a snuggling down evening sunset... but thanks for the offer of doubling up

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From: MSN NicknamePoetess-three1Sent: 10/5/2008 3:38 PM
Sunsets?? Just don't make me post any more pictures...  

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