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| | From:  Zydha (Original Message) | Sent: 5/1/2004 10:52 PM |
| In my deepest slumber Someone found the key, They silently, slipped into mind Unlocking all of me. Forgotten dreams escaping I saw who I had been, Reminding me...in finding me My dreams still unforseen. I rose in glowing fervour The world was mine to keep. 'til the key slipped from it's lock, and I returned ... to sleep. (c) Zydha Hart 2004 ........................................................... | In my deepest slumber Someone found the key, They silently, crept into mind Unlocking all of me. Forgotten dreams escaping I saw who I had been, Reminding me...in finding me My dreams still unforseen. I rose in glowing fervour The world was mine to keep. 'til the key slipped from it's lock, and I returned ... to sleep. (c) Zydha Hart 2004 |
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Hiya Zydha, I totally love that! I cant quite put my finger on why though, but i do really like it, honestly it is just so lovely. I actually think it's the way that the poem rhymes, because it adds something else to it for me.. something that a non-rhyming poem sometimes doesnt have. Thanks for posting this, even though i know i have made no sense what-so-ever in this reply... but what the heck, you get my drift! We'll put it in my terms shall we?? Do the words Bling Bling mean anything to you?? lol. Thanks again, speak soon. Fluff. |
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