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New Poems Pge 1 : You Creep
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From: MSN Nicknameladycomealot  (Original Message)Sent: 5/3/2004 10:35 AM
You Creep.
 
You made me care
then you made me weep
do you think it's fair
to pull me in so deep.
 
When your life is short
and full of lies
do you ever get caught
or do you just cut your ties.
 
Late at night when all alone
do you think about
picking up that phone
and letting it all out.
 
When with your wife
do you think of the pain
you caused in my life
why can't you explain.
 
I cared so much for you too
thought it was forever and a day
I'd forgotten that men like you
know how to betray.
 
I thought I'd learnt
about the different men
I'd been twice burnt
Oh God, not again.
 
Now a new day has started
my life starts again
I know that we've parted
but I won't hate all men.
 
I will go on
to live once more
so your little con
just opened another door.
 
So goodbye my sweet
I wish you well
don't burn your feet
on the way to hell.


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From: MSN NicknameZydhaSent: 5/8/2004 5:27 AM
Great poem, Lady, I don't know why it has not recieved other comments,the demise of 'the other woman captured so well.
 
Have you remarked on others poetry yet, Lady? It helps for everyone to get to know the writer a little and will break the ice. Your poetry is really good, I have enjoyed what I have read so far, Zydha

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From: MSN NicknameladycomealotSent: 5/9/2004 12:26 PM
Thankyou, it is nice to know that they are getting read as it took a lot of guts for me to post, I have others that I will put on soon enough
 
Julie
xxx