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From: MSN NicknameneverCominHomeSent: 6/21/2008 3:11 AM
Nic...copy your text into Notepad, then copy from there and paste into here...that will get rid of the detritus in the text...
 
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From: MSN NicknameSirNicolas4Sent: 6/21/2008 1:14 PM

splendid moonlit summer night
Of the bright and silly sort
Winos and mayflies would die for
And the promise of some dreamt-up jen
Who’d peel me grapes and wipe my juicies
it’s show time at the paris cafe
Candles fiddle as shadows dance
And thin poets squeeze plump phrases 
jens�?grapes into strung-out pearls
to stroke bereted and goateed ears 
with jewels that float on stolen breath.
Its showtime at the paris café.
Pissed-off poets pace a tiger perp-walk
Spitting broken teeth
and glowing glass shards
That bloody ears and shred brains on impact
followed by hip pulpy pure poets 
healing sounds of the inner spheres
It is showtime at the paris cafe
Then a pause a knowing wave
As steps into the quiet light
The dapper old snapper
This old ferry pilot all seersuckered
And aqua velvety quiet hushed all with words
A wistful lament an ode he began
It was magic at night at the paris cafe
To hardons he had when he was sixteen
How majestic they were stretched end to end
He missed it that crossing over to forever’s bend
By-gone Ferries and hardons poured black-and-white
Snapshots of me into me older coming
As he smiled he wanted one back, one more time.
ah those nights at the paris café.

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From: MSN Nicknameswitchgears1_Sent: 7/9/2008 12:16 AM
 
Great piece of work, Nick.
 
This an OK layout for your book?
 
 
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poetry night paris cafe
 
splendid moonlit summer night
Of the bright and silly sort
Winos and mayflies would die for
And the promise of some dreamt-up jen

Who’d peel me grapes and wipe my juicies


it’s show time at the paris cafe

Candles fiddle as shadows dance
And thin poets squeeze plump phrases 
jens�?grapes into strung-out pearls
to stroke bereted and goateed ears 
with jewels that float on stolen breath.

Its showtime at the paris café.
 
Pissed-off poets pace a tiger perp-walk
Spitting broken teeth
and glowing glass shards
That bloody ears and shred brains on impact
followed by hip pulpy pure poets 
healing sounds of the inner spheres

It is showtime at the paris cafe
 
Then a pause a knowing wave
As steps into the quiet light
The dapper old snapper
This old ferry pilot all seersuckered
And aqua velvety quiet hushed all with words

A wistful lament an ode he began

It was magic at night at the paris cafe
 
To hardons he had when he was sixteen
How majestic they were stretched end to end
He missed it that crossing over to forever’s bend
By-gone Ferries and hardons poured black-and-white
Snapshots of me into me older coming
As he smiled he wanted one back, one more time.

ah those nights at the paris café.
 
 
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