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New Poems Pge 2 : Because I love you
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From: MSN Nicknamebroadsword310  (Original Message)Sent: 9/14/2004 7:36 AM
Because I love you

I will clean your shoes
I will make your bed
I will iron your clothes
I will bake you bread
I will be there to talk
I will be there to cry
I will walk beside you
I will watch you die

I will give you love
I will comfort you
I will share your bed
I will see you through
I will give you support
I will lend you a hand
I will care for you
I will take your stand

I will never leave
I will with you stay
I will strive with you
I will make your day
I will be your lover
I will be your friend
I will make you happy
I will my life spend

And just because I love you





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From: MSN NicknameForestFlower5893Sent: 9/14/2004 7:59 AM
Hi Bryan
 
Thats very sweet - shame life isn't always like that
 
Emma

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From: MSN NicknameValerie-JaneSent: 9/14/2004 8:58 AM
Any man who can iron and bake bread is a dream come true !
A nice thoughtful poem Bryan and as Emma said, if only..........................sigh
Valerie X

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From: MSN NicknameMindmanukSent: 9/14/2004 11:55 AM
Excuse me I do all my cooking & ironing Great poem mate.
Mark

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From: MSN Nicknamebroadsword310Sent: 9/14/2004 12:13 PM
Same here Mark, some of us have to. Along with washing hoovering dusting and all the other things we take for granted when children or married.

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From: MSN NicknameGretathepoet2Sent: 9/14/2004 6:33 PM
How lovely to have someone say these things to you......beautiful sentiments

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From: MSN NicknameZydhaSent: 9/15/2004 9:44 AM
A promise any woman would be pleased to receive, Bryan, and for some men, it is not enough.
 
The repetition is effective, as that is what life is when taking care of a home
 
Mmnnnn....Hey....are you for hire? lol Zydha

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