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New Poetry Pge 4 : Red Hats and Black Lace
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From: MSN NicknameForestFlower5893  (Original Message)Sent: 10/21/2005 6:08 PM
He would know her by the red hat
that she would wear
flopped casually
upon her golden hair.
 
He would watch through a thousand strangers
just to catch a sight
of a red hat bobbing
above steps breezy bright
 
and from a distance he would see
anticipation on her face
imagine her thigh
in a bow of black lace.
 
He would watch until their lips would meet
the red hat
buffeting his brow
and that would be that
 
until the morning hour
when hat and black lace
would lie
like flowers of fallen grace.
 
and he would watch her sleeping lashes
sweeping 'cross her cheeks
the only bow now
bright red and his to seek.
 
Emma
 
 
 


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From: LittleBillSent: 10/21/2005 10:22 PM
The fine art of titulation Emma.....some women have it, some don't...you my dear, definitely do...wonderful build up and that last verse....almost perfect....I suppose we all like to be left a bit of elbow room for our fantasies...a neat accomplished poem. Well done.

: )lb

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From: MSN Nicknamemikhail34Sent: 10/22/2005 10:11 AM
excellent imagry Emma
 
the whole story from images surrounding the story
 
great work,
 
m

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From: MSN NicknameZydhaSent: 10/23/2005 6:38 AM
Mmnnn....I have read this twice over, Emma, and it is so intriguing.
 
Words painting yet another wonderful picture with your special ease, I enjoyed very much, Zy 

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From: MSN NicknameForestFlower5893Sent: 10/25/2005 4:29 PM
Thanks lb,
 
Glad you enjoyed - I totally agree we all need to leave just that little bit to the imagination.
 
Emma

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From: MSN NicknameForestFlower5893Sent: 10/25/2005 4:30 PM
Thanks Mikhail
 
Glad you liked - just a bit of fun really with words
 
Emma

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From: MSN NicknameForestFlower5893Sent: 10/25/2005 4:30 PM
Thanks Zy,
 
I do like to try and create a picture with words - so I'm glad this worked for you
 
Emma

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From: MSN NicknameForestFlower5893Sent: 10/25/2005 4:32 PM
Thanks Peter,
 
I'll have to have a look in my collection lol  Funny how red hats conjure up so much
 
Emma

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