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Always rushing, beads of sweat brushing as I lose my way. Countless minutes ticking cotton blouse sticking as I search for what it is I cannot say. Exertions blushing lost keys and rushing wasting endless time. Snatch a mouthful a batch of hopeful kisses long departed that I cannot find. EMG |
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Sounds like a touch of White Rabbit Syndrome ...lol...I like the flow of this...it's sharp and moves quickly along just as one would when late for work. Thanks for this. : )lb |
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Yes, i identify with this one - it bounces along very well, Emma. Ann |
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thanks lb - I always seem to be in a rush when I go to work - and because I never leave things in the same place, spend endless moments searching for my keys. Emma |
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Thanks Ann - for me, there never seems enough hours in the day - and I seem to spend my time trying to catch up with myself. Emma |
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Hi Emma I really enjoyed this poem, I am always hunting for my keys and things, but am quite good at not being late, and generally make sure I am 10 minutes early, unless of course i forgetthat I've got to be somewhere and then I don't turn up at all, lol. Scarlet |
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Thanks Scarlet I'm notorious for missing appointments or getting the wrong day - I think I spend too much time dreaming lol Emma |
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| | From: Zydha | Sent: 11/2/2005 10:44 AM |
I'd missed this one slipping away, Emma, and as all say, very nicely capturing the harassment of the shortage of time. Very smooth rhythm, yet your words creating a slight panic in the mind. Like all replies, lol, I 'steal time' to be on here during the day, or get so involved in something and frequently forget that someone is coming or that I have to be somewhere until the last second, so could identify with your inspiration. Zy |
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Just wanted to echo everyone else Emma....I'm not usually one for rushing but lately I seem to have rather a lot on my plate so there's a bit of dashing too and fro going on, could very much identify with this. Sinead |
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Thanks Clive, I get up early - yet somehow time still escapes me and I end up rushing to work - I'm usually blasted by Radio 3 in the morning Emma |
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Thanks Zy, I think I am a bad manager of time lol - and I never seem to leave keys etc in the same place - hence panic Emma |
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Thanks Sinead Sometimes life is like that - an endless round of rushing and catching up - hope things calm down for you - I'm such a chaotic person most of the time, I'm still chasing my tail. Emma |
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great pace Emma - just like rushing around trying to get out of the house to get to work thanks for this, m |
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