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New Poetry Pge 5 : am i callow
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From: MSN Nicknamemakhala334  (Original Message)Sent: 10/25/2006 12:04 AM
using a borrowed computer - hope this goes through
 
am i callow?
 
am i callow
supple bough or meadow fallow
 
do - do you see me as fawn
or wounded wren? �?my sweet friend the-dawn
which - - - - - - which
 
do you hear my whimper as the rustle of leaves at solstice-fall
do you hear or touch me - - - - - - -  at all

i wonder from time to time
as my mind replaces warm arms for vines
 
hug me?
 
just hold my lush and callow parts near your soft-skinned tallow-heart divine �?please?
 
i’m not catching - - - - - - promise [nervous giggle]
 
i’m neither real nor mortal �?and - i’ll just fly-off at last light �?or first star �?whichever you like
or whomever you are
 
thou deft touch �?oooooooooo-uah �?sanctioning life meant so much �?once
 
can - can you smell this?
oooooooh - dying leaves and worm-tracks on winter’s dawn
it fills my head with musky ballistic-balls and curtain-calls of queen Anne’s lace
heavens �?heaven’s sake �?i miss thee so
 
deeply
will you linger? �?i’ll be just a moment as warm wishes ginger
for thee?
 
oh look -
loons on lake-fire as sun burns crested heron �?there
over there �?see
 
the loon �?me �?the heron �?you �?the lake �?god �?the sun �?certainty
the fire - - - - - - - good-bye

as i hold thee
 
as i hold thee
i am callow
waning grip - heart rendered sallow
x
 

best,
m


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From: MSN NicknameVocalDixSent: 10/25/2006 1:36 AM
Wow beautifully sensual and passionate read!  Truly a gift of a poem!  Borrow more computers!  lol.  Awww I would let you linger and give you a hug anyday!

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From: MSN Nicknamemakhala334Sent: 10/25/2006 4:19 AM
Zy - Stella - Dixie
 
thank you so much
 
feelings are in the eye of the reader in these writings -  always
 
but
 
for me - i felt warm, gentle, earthy - and passonate about nature - but not sensual - but then - that's just what i felt in writing - and not what readers may feel in reading
 
most happy you could see something in this work i could not
 
m

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From: MSN NicknameZydhaSent: 10/25/2006 12:24 PM
Sorry, Mikhail, head still thick with flu and cold effects, a wrong choice of word with sensual, meant sensuous, 'affecting the senses free if inhibitions'. Should have thought longer about the meanings and chosen wiser.
 
There is an element of seduction in the way your words sensuously draw the reader into these thoughts of nature,  Zy
 
Hey, lol, just looked again and I did say 'sensuous'!!!

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From: MSN NicknameBouncing_FluffSent: 10/25/2006 8:14 PM
Brilliant piece as always Mikhail, once more, the words you use and the layout just capture the reader as the piece is read. I love it.
 
Fluff

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From: MSN Nicknamemakhala334Sent: 10/25/2006 10:37 PM
no worries dear Zy
 
hope you are feeling better SOON!
 
m

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From: MSN Nicknamemakhala334Sent: 10/25/2006 10:37 PM
thank you Fluff - you are always very kind
 
keep well,
m

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From: MSN Nicknamemakhala334Sent: 10/26/2006 12:11 AM
thank you so much Peter my friend
 
as to the words - i wish i could take full credit - but - as i have said before - my muse used my hands and pen to scribe his/her bidding - these poems simply appear in my brain and require that i write them down
 
this past weekend a beauty came through my head - but i was outside working and couldn't remember a lick of it when i came in - this is the way for me - i don't understand it - i just go along
 
thanks for you many kindnesses over our time on the corner Peter - you are much a much accomplished poet and a  much appreciated friend,
m

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From: MSN NicknameVocalDixSent: 10/26/2006 4:08 PM
Er....didn't mean sensual as in SEX mikhail lol.  The senses, um you know!

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From: MSN Nicknamemakhala334Sent: 10/26/2006 9:47 PM
spot-on Dixie - i agree

thanks again,
m

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From: MSN Nicknamemakhala334Sent: 10/28/2006 5:49 PM
thank you very much Peggy - you are always so kind

hope your rehab goes well

best,
m

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From: MSN Nicknamemakhala334Sent: 10/29/2006 5:35 AM
my move is very hard for me - i will miss my land and my cattle

thank you for caring,
m

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