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From: MSN NicknameCara_inSpirit  (Original Message)Sent: 10/28/2006 5:36 AM
 
I sit here and I type
I share my fears
my hopes my dreams
my inner secrets on the screen
I have no mask
this is my cupboard bare.
 
I share my nightmares
my struggles within
the beast who haunts me
and shadows that lurk
I have a mask
that conceals this cupboard
it keeps me safe
 
 
I have me myself and I
finding trust in self
I can share myself with you
I can share myself with another
I have a mask
is it  friend or foe
shall I take it off
 
A fire burns before me 
I choose to be here
I step into my fear
I  step into the fire
let it consume me
transform
Choosing to live in a place within me
where no masks are needed.
 
 
Cara October 2006


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 Message 2 of 11 in Discussion 
From: MSN NicknameZydhaSent: 10/28/2006 6:43 AM
Cara, I am so pleased you accepted my invitation, your poetry really does speak volumes to me.
 
This one in particular of all I have read in the other site even....is so much like something I would have written in a 'self' reflected moment of thought.
 
"I share my nightmares
my struggles within
the beast who haunts me
and shadows that lurk
I have a mask
that conceals this cupboard
it keeps me safe"
 
Words very close to home, Cara, I know where words such as these come from, poetry is an amazing exposure of our 'self' and you have used it well in this poetic comment, Zy

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From: MSN NicknameVocalDixSent: 10/28/2006 12:54 PM
This is an amazing write Cara!  Truly enjoyed this one.

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Sent: 10/28/2006 3:53 PM
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 Message 5 of 11 in Discussion 
From: MSN NicknameCara_inSpiritSent: 10/28/2006 4:55 PM
Zy thankyou for your kind compliment
I had guessed you have a story of your own . I have been reading some of your poetry to and it also speaks volumes and to my heart
 
 
hugs and love 
Cara

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From: MSN NicknameCara_inSpiritSent: 10/28/2006 4:59 PM
Hi Stella
I  write what is in my heart and the fingers type before I can balk
I have so many things I want to say.
 
I would not share here if I did not feel at home.
You have all been very welcoming and I really do feel like I can belong here.
You may not know just how significant that is for me.
thanks for your kindness
hugs
Cara

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From: MSN NicknameCara_inSpiritSent: 10/28/2006 5:00 PM
thanks

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From: MSN Nicknamemakhala334Sent: 10/28/2006 5:53 PM
well written Cara

many of us have masks

for me - poetry is my safe

thanks for sharing,
mikhail

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From: MSN NicknameCara_inSpiritSent: 10/29/2006 3:58 PM
Thank you all for your posts.
I feel a little overwhelmed by it all
I am happy that my words speak to you
 
when I write my soul speaks
it is not me so much but a deeper part of me
that is intouch with the core of who I am
words give voice to the hidden depths within
 
Cara

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